Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Climate Change

Climate Change aw8GP

Climate change is one of a major issue which the global is facing in the current context. Therefore in this essay I would like discussing in the factors effecting climate hange and the precautions that could be taken to mitigate the effects. According to the scientists the main reason for climate change is deforestation, therefore people should consider on re- forestation in order to overcome this serious issue. Secondly, accelerated levels of industrialization also negatively contribute on climate changes. The gasses emmissioned by factories and vehicles also end up with air pollution which ultimately end up with unfavourable weather conditions to the man kind. Due to the global warming, the glazziers starts to melt while increasing the sea levels. This also ends up with drowing down the islands by decreasing the space available for man kind in the universe. Climate change also effects agricultural and livestock industries adversely. Majority of the cultivation get destroyed due to bad weather conditions such as heavy rain, wind, floods and drought conditions. In order to overcome this issue governments has interveined into this matter by imposing enviromental related laws. Also governments encourage people to use eco friendly equipments and vehicles such as electric cars. For an example government can take policy decissions to encourage people in using bio gasses, wind power and other alternative power sources instead of fossil power sources. In conclusion it is believed that both individuals and governments bears the responsibility of protecting the environment. For an example United Nations 2030 agenda is one of a major initiative that governments have taken to show their interest in protecting environment together with achieving sustainable development goals.

You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtemperaturehumidity
Climate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
change
 is one of a major issue which the global is facing in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 context. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Therefore,
Therefore
 in this essay I would like discussing in the factors effecting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtemperaturehumidity
climate
Possible spelling mistake found.rangechangehanghangedhangshinge
hange
 and the precautions that could be taken
 to mitigate the effects.

According to the scientists the main reason for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtemperaturehumidity
climate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
change
 is deforestation, therefore
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 should consider on re- forestation in order to overcome this serious issue. Secondly
, accelerated levels of industrialization also
negatively
 contribute on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtemperaturehumidity
climate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
changes
. The gasses Possible spelling mistake found.commissioned
emmissioned
 by factories and vehicles also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 up with air pollution which ultimately
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 up with Possible spelling mistake. 'unfavourable' is British English.unfavorable
unfavourable
 weather conditions to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 kind. Due to the global warming, the Possible spelling mistake found.glaziers
glazziers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 to melt while increasing the sea levels. This also
 ends up with Possible spelling mistake found.growingdrawingdrowningrowingdroningcrowing
drowing
 down the islands by decreasing the space available for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 kind in the universe. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtemperaturehumidity
Climate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
change
also
 effects agricultural and livestock industries adversely
. Majority of the cultivation This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
destroyed
 due to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 weather conditions such as heavy rain, wind, floods and drought conditions.

In order to overcome this issue You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
governments
 has Possible spelling mistake found.intervenedinter veined
interveined
 into this matter by imposing Possible spelling mistake found.environmental
enviromental
 related laws. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
governments
 encourage This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.eco-friendly
eco friendly
 equipments and vehicles such as electric cars. For an example You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 can take policy Possible spelling mistake found.decisions
decissions
 to encourage This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in using bio gasses, wind power and other alternative power sources instead
 of fossil power sources.

In The comma is probably missing here: "conclusion, it".conclusion, it
conclusion it
is believed
 that both individuals and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
governments
 bears the responsibility of protecting the environment. For an example United Nations 2030 agenda is one of a major initiative that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
governments
 have taken to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 their interest in protecting environment together with achieving sustainable development goals. 