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City people are suffering from physical and social problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

City people are suffering from physical and social problems. weLJn

Nowadays, most of the crowds are living in urban area due to the fact that there are easily find out the job, and get best primary services. Most of the communities are facing a lots of biological and Society problems hence some people believe that totally against staying in Metropolitan area. I completely agree with this idea There are several reasons of this statement that will be discussed. Firstly, urban area has been developing on the contrary in few years have not elementary service. For instance, cities of the Gujarat have not enough drainage contribution. As a result, there people have suffering various types of water diseases which are Malaria, Dyria, Swine Flu, flu etc. Moreover, in urban area all food items are more costly hence urban's poor family can't purchase it. As consequence, they can't fulfill own body calories so they can not work properly in light of the fact that their weakness. Other reason why I agree with people do not like to live in outside of the village. Crowds are not facing only physical crux as well as social puzzle. In present time, Anti Social elements are increasing in there hence mankind do not feel safe in town place. For example, most of the girl can't move outside of home in city because antisocial people proportion rate is occurred on peak level so rape cases have expanded in well developed city due to this case crowds can't like stay in urban area. To sum up, number of city area have not better drainage system although eating items are also most costly has people hurting from body ability and disease. There are also upsurge rate of unsocial human because of this woman can't come from their home in late night. I personally believe that urban city is good for education and finance but not about problem of mentally and physically.

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urban
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area
 due to the fact that there are easily
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get best
 primary services. Most of the communities are facing Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a lot" or simply "lots"?a lotlots
a lots
 of biological and Society problems hence
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some
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people
 believe that totally
 against staying in Metropolitan You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. I completely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 There are several reasons of this statement that will be discussed
.

Firstly
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdowntowncivilmetropolitancivic
urban
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area
 has been developing on the contrary
 in few years have not elementary service. For instance
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 of the Gujarat have not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 drainage contribution. As a result
, there You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 have suffering various types of water diseases which are Malaria, Possible spelling mistake found.SyriaDaria
Dyria
, Swine Flu, flu etc. Moreover
, in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdowntowncivilmetropolitancivic
urban
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 all food items are more costly hence
 urban's poor family You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
can't
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purchase
 it. As consequence, they You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
can't
 fulfill This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 body calories This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they can not work properly
 in light of the fact that their weakness.

Other reason why I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 do not like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in This phrase is redundant. Consider using "outside".outside
outside of
 the village. Crowds are not facing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 physical crux as well
 as social puzzle. In present time, It appears that a hyphen is missing.Anti-Social
Anti Social
 elements are increasing in Did you mean "their"?their
there
hence
 mankind do not feel safe in town place. For example
, most of the girl You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
can't
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 outside of home in city This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 antisocial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 proportion rate is occurred
 on peak level This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 rape cases have expanded in This word is normally spelled with hyphen.well-developed
well developed
 city due to this case crowds You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
can't
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urban
 area.

To sum up, number of city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 have not Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: "bettered", "welled".betteredwelled
better
 drainage system although eating items are also
 most costly has You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 hurting from body ability and disease. There are also
 upsurge rate of unsocial human because of this
 woman You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
can't
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 from their home in late night. I personally
 believe that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdowntowncivilmetropolitancivic
urban
 city is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for education and finance This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not about problem of mentally and physically
. 