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Choose one of the following topics and write Problem/Solution paragraphs. You should link the problems with the solution. (150-200 words) 1. Negative effects of social media

Choose one of the following topics and write Problem/Solution paragraphs. You should link the problems with the solution. (150-200 words) 1. Negative effects of social media 3ab0d
The most efficient way to reach out to the world in general is through Social Media. It contains many platforms to promote your views, meet new people, improve your skills and many more advantages. However, it can do more harm than good. The side effects of social media have increased over the last decade. For example, wasting too much time on Social Media without gaining benefits, like earning money or improving skills. This problem is especially serious amongst young people. Additionally, spreading rumours and hatred is one of the greatest side effects of social media. It is very important to realize that not every information conveyed through social media should be accurate and shared. The serious outcomes that may arise as a result of the mentioned effects could be avoided through many solutions. One of the most effective solution is parental monitoring. Parents need to be attentive to their children use of the internet, by making sure they don’t harm themselves or others with their use of Social Media. Moreover, people need to have self-awareness to not become heavily dependent on such sites. Generally, people need to focus more on their offline hobbies, friends and ways to enjoy their lives.
The most efficient way to reach out to the world
in general
is through
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Social
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Media
. It contains
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many
platforms to promote your views,
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meet
new
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people
,
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improve
your
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skills
and
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many
more advantages.
However
, it can do more harm than
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
. The side effects of
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social
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media
have increased over the last decade.
For example
, wasting too much time on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Social
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Media
without gaining benefits, like earning money or improving
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
. This problem is
especially
serious amongst young
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people
.
Additionally
, spreading
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rumours
and hatred is one of the greatest side effects of
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social
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media
. It is
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very
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important
to realize that not every information conveyed through
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social
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media
should be accurate and shared.

The serious outcomes that may arise
as a result
of the mentioned effects could
be avoided
through
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many
solutions. One of the most effective
Please check whether a plural form of 'solution' should be used.
solution
is parental monitoring. Parents need to be attentive to their children
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of the internet, by making sure they don’t harm themselves or others with their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Media
.
Moreover
,
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people
need to have self-awareness to not become
heavily
dependent on such sites.
Generally
,
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people
need to focus more on their offline hobbies, friends and ways to enjoy their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
.
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IELTS essay Choose one of the following topics and write Problem/Solution paragraphs. You should link the problems with the solution. (150-200 words) 1. Negative effects of social media

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
200 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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