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Children and teenagers are committing more and more crimes in many countries. Why is this happening. How can be stop this or least reduce this crime.

Nowadays, crime is quite common issue for society as juveniles are countinueing attracting towards offensive and illegal activities globally. There are some strong reasons of this case as well as some strict measures which can be prevented such harsh incidents. First and foremost thing is that, lack of education is the prime element which encourage children to commit a crime. If at an early age teenagers are away from the schools, it means they are definitely on a wrong path. Furthermore, sometimes a circle of bad people is also becomes reason of an unethical activity. Regardless of thinking about their parent's emotions, some youngsters start taking drugs and alcoholic drinks. When they get addicted, they start stealing money. Not only stealing, but sometime children commit murder as well. After that they regret of all little things they did unnecessarily. To tackle this hurdle, government and parents are crucial factor. State authorities should focus on best education they can provide to children. In such ways off-springs would aware of illegal things and will think twice before committing any kind of crime. Similarly, parents have all legal rights to make their children an honest and dissent person. By communicating with them daily and listening their concerns, it is possible that teenagers will understand a difference between wrong and right. These efforts can definitely turn their bad habits into good habits as well as the rate of child crime will also be deducted. Hammering the last nail, it can be said that, good measures by government and effective parental skills can help to stop child offense at a rapid pace.
Nowadays,
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is quite common issue for society as juveniles are
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countinueing
attracting towards offensive and illegal activities globally. There are
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strong reasons of this case
as well
as
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some
strict measures which can be
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prevented
such harsh incidents.

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and foremost thing is that, lack of education is the prime element which encourage
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children
to commit a
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crime
. If at an early age
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teenagers
are away from the schools, it means they are definitely on a
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wrong
path.
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sometimes
a circle of
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bad
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people
is
also
becomes reason of an unethical activity. Regardless of thinking about their parent's emotions,
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some
youngsters
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start
taking drugs and alcoholic drinks. When they
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get
addicted, they
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start
stealing money. Not
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only
stealing,
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but
sometime
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children
commit murder
as well
.
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that they regret of all
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little
things they did
unnecessarily
.

To tackle this hurdle,
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government
and parents are crucial factor. State authorities should focus on best education they can provide to
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children
. In such ways off-springs would aware of illegal things and will
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think
twice
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before
committing any kind of
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crime
.
Similarly
, parents have all legal rights to
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make
their
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children
an honest and dissent person. By communicating with them daily and listening their concerns, it is possible that
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teenagers
will understand a difference between
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wrong
and right. These efforts can definitely turn their
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bad
habits into
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good
habits
as well
as the rate of child
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crime
will
also
be deducted
.

Hammering the last nail, it can
be said
that,
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good
measures by
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government
and effective parental
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skills
can
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help
to
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stop
child offense at a rapid pace.

IELTS essay Children and teenagers are committing more and more crimes in many countries. Why is this happening. How can be stop this or least reduce this crime.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
267 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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