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Although both of passage and lecture discusse about decline ih the population of cedar trees, lecturer casts doubt on which is written in the article. The passage described tree reason for this declination of cedar trees. However, the professor argued these reasons. At the first, in the passage mentions to the insects, especially cedar bark beetle, as a cause of declining of the cedar trees. Yet the lecturer states that these trees not only are resistance enough to these insects, but also, in fact, are much more resistance compared to the other tree species in face these insects. Second, in the passage brown bears is proposed to account of decreasing of cedar trees. The professor, however, disagrees with this idea. The passage sates that clawing of the bears results in being weak tress. The professor explains that there are somewhere that there is not brown bear there, but cedar polulation is declining. Therefor, this idea that brown bear could be an reason for decreasing the cedar trees is a unreasonable idea. Third, in the article climate change is mentioned as an another reason for this changes in the cedar polulation. the lecturer, however, casts doubt on this idea by explanation about decline of cedar treea in different areas with different temperature. He belived that some of these trees was able to grow in the low temperature regions. So the idea of effect of climate in the cedar tree polulation could not a fundamental reason for this change.
Although both of
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passage
and lecture
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discusse
about decline
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ih
the population of
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cedar
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trees
, lecturer casts doubt on which
is written
in the article. The
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passage
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described
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tree
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reason
for this declination of
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cedar
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trees
.
However
, the professor argued these reasons.

At the
first
, in the
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passage
mentions to the insects,
especially
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cedar
bark beetle, as a cause of declining of the
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cedar
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trees
.
Yet
the lecturer states that these
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trees
not
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only
are resistance
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enough
to these insects,
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but
also
, in fact, are much more resistance compared to the other
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tree
species in face these insects.

Second, in the
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passage
brown
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bears
is proposed
to account of decreasing of
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cedar
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trees
. The professor,
however
, disagrees with this
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idea
. The
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passage
sates that clawing of the
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bears
results in being weak tress.
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The
professor
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explains
that there are somewhere that there is not brown
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bear
there,
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but
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cedar
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polulation
is declining. Therefor, this
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idea
that brown
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bear
could be
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an
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reason
for decreasing the
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cedar
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trees
is
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a
unreasonable
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idea
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Third, in the article climate
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change
is mentioned
as an another
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reason
for
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this
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changes
in the
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polulation
.
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the
lecturer,
however
, casts doubt on this
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idea
by explanation about decline of
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cedar
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treea
in
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different
areas with
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different
temperature.
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that
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some
of these
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trees
was able to grow in the low temperature regions.
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So
the
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idea
of effect of climate in the
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cedar
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tree
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polulation
could not a fundamental
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reason
for this
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change
.
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IELTS essay cedar trees

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
247 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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