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CCTV cameras advantages or disadvantages

CCTV cameras advantages or disadvantages KYA70
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cameras for reducing crime is becoming popular. Is this
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or are there more drawbacks than advantages. I will
start
by looking at the advantages. One of the major plus points of using CCTV cameras is that it can
help
the police. What's more,
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IELTS essay CCTV cameras advantages or disadvantages

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