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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam' How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam' How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars? J1na
For the past thirty years, cars ownership is increase as in the past and resulting a traffic jam. Many evidence that supporting this statement and government has a new rules for using a cars. Firstly, in the big cities all over has a vehicle such as cars. The price for the cars is not that high as in the past and the reason of it is has a new technology for cars and the old technology of those cars will decreased the price. For example, the sport cars is got a higher price than a common car and it makes the company for old technology cars is lowering their price for takes many costumers. Secondly, the government now has a new rules for the ownership of cars. It is called the even and odd plate rules. In the high way in a crowded cities, they only take an agreement based from the date. For instance, if the date is an odd number then is only and odd number plate of that can go in and otherwise. In conclusion, a huge group of people own their own cars by the decreased the price in the cars company. The government also trying to limit of wear a cars in a day.
For the past thirty years,
cars
ownership is increase as in the past and resulting a traffic jam.
Many evidence
that supporting this statement and
government
has a new
rules
for using
a cars
.

Firstly
, in the
big
cities all over has a vehicle such as
cars
. The
price
for the
cars
is not that high as in the past and the reason of it is has a new technology for
cars
and the
old
technology of those
cars
will decreased the
price
.
For example
, the sport
cars
is
got
a higher
price
than a common
car
and it
makes
the
company
for
old
technology
cars
is lowering their
price
for takes
many
costumers.

Secondly
, the
government
now
has a new
rules
for the ownership of
cars
. It
is called
the even and odd plate
rules
. In the high way in a crowded
cities
, they
only
take an agreement based from the date.
For instance
, if the date is an odd number
then
is
only
and odd number plate of that can go in and
otherwise
.

In conclusion
, a huge group of
people
own
their
own
cars
by the decreased the
price
in the
cars
company
. The
government
also
trying to limit of wear a
cars
in a day.
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IELTS essay Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam' How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

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