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Brainstorm an essay that leans toward comparison. Dogs and cats

Brainstorm an essay that leans toward comparison. Dogs and cats 6dlDr
Both cats and dogs are mammals and are viviparous; Cats and dogs have been with people for a long time to help them protect their homes; Cats and dogs are now mostly pets, living with people. Cats are independent and don't need to be taken out for a walk. Dogs are loyal and need to be taken out for exercise. . The essential difference between cats and dogs: first of all, cats and dogs are different in race, there are racial differences. Secondly, cats and dogs have totally different personalities. Dogs are warm-hearted, active and loyal to their owners. They like to follow their owners in everything, stick to them and even lick them when they are happy; The cat is cold and doesn't listen to the master, and the loyalty of the cat is lower than that of the dog.
Both cats and
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dogs
are mammals and are viviparous; Cats and
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dogs
have been with
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people
for a long time to
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help
them protect their homes; Cats and
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dogs
are
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now
mostly
pets, living with
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people
. Cats are independent and don't need to
be taken
out for a walk.
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Dogs
are loyal and need to
be taken
out for exercise.
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.
The essential difference between cats and
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dogs
:
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first of all
, cats and
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dogs
are
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different
in race, there are racial differences.
Secondly
, cats and
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dogs
have
totally
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different
personalities.
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Dogs
are warm-hearted, active and loyal to their owners. They like to follow their owners in everything, stick to them and even lick them when they are happy; The cat is
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cold
and doesn't listen to the master, and the loyalty of the cat is lower than that of the
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dog
.

IELTS essay Brainstorm an essay that leans toward comparison. Dogs and cats

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  American English
1 paragraphs
141 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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