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Bookshops should give preference to selling local books rather than imported ones . Do you agree or disagree. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience enc

Bookshops should give preference to selling local books rather than imported ones. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience enc qKXP
Books provide the opportunity to learn something new, hence they are a gateway to the acquisition and preservation of knowledge. In recent times, there has a robust conversation about the book make up of bookshops. Many think that the selling of indigenous books should take precedent over those authored by foreigners. This essay agrees that selling local publications should be prioritized over imported books and the reason as to why would be examined. One of the principal reasons why local books should be sold more is that access to such books helps educate young people about their heritage and traditions. With local books, students can gain knowledge about the accurate depiction of their culture from an author with first-hand experience, thus not relying on international writers to tell their stories for them. To further buttress this point, Iran prioritises the publishing and sales of locally authored books and as a result, they have managed to preserve their rich values and culture for centuries. Therefore, selling indigenous books helps enlighten young people and ultimately preserves traditions. Also, selling local books helps promote the work of local authors, hence providing a source of income and livelihood. Furthermore, when indigenous authors are encouraged, this may inspire them to continue writing and subsequently earn them global recognition and accolades. As a result, boosting the image and reputation of their home countries. For example, Nigeria has many negative stereotypes, but a positive is that it is the home country of one of the continents few Nobel Laureate, Professor Wole Soyinka. Thus, selling local supports authors and in extension the nation. To sum up, the preference for local books over imported ones helps conserve traditions by educating the younger generation about their heritage and also promotes and encourages local creative authors. Although foreign books foster diversity by exposing people to different norms and traditions, this essay believes that the positives of selling local books, namely maintenance of history outweigh the drawbacks.
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provide the opportunity to learn something new,
hence
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agrees
that
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selling
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local
publications should
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over imported
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books
and the reason as to why would
be examined
.

One of the principal reasons why
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local
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books
should
be sold
more is that access to such
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books
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helps
educate young
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people
about their heritage and traditions. With
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local
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books
, students can gain knowledge about the accurate depiction of their culture from an
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author
with
first
-hand experience,
thus
not relying on international writers to
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tell
their stories for them. To
further
buttress this point, Iran
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prioritises
the publishing and sales of
locally
authored
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books
and
as a result
, they have managed to preserve their rich values and culture for centuries.
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,
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selling
indigenous
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books
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helps
enlighten young
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people
and
ultimately
preserves traditions.

Also
,
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selling
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local
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books
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helps
promote the work of
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local
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authors
,
hence
providing a source of income and livelihood.
Furthermore
, when indigenous
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authors
are encouraged
, this may inspire them to continue writing and
subsequently
earn them global recognition and accolades.
As a result
, boosting the image and reputation of their home countries.
For example
, Nigeria has
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many
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negative
stereotypes,
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a
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positive
is that it is the home country of one of the continents few Nobel Laureate, Professor
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Wole
Soyinka.
Thus
,
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selling
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local
supports
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authors
and in extension the nation.

To sum up, the preference for
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local
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books
over imported ones
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helps
conserve traditions by educating the younger generation about their heritage and
also
promotes and encourages
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local
creative
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authors
. Although foreign
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books
foster diversity by exposing
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people
to
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different
norms and traditions, this essay believes that the positives of
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selling
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local
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books
,
namely
maintenance of history outweigh the drawbacks.
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IELTS essay Bookshops should give preference to selling local books rather than imported ones. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience enc

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