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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: books are not needed any more because people can read information on computers.

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In the past two decades, with a galloping progress, technology provided us a plethora of innovation to improve our life. The significant of all is the computer, which allows us to learn, socialize and have fun. One can find anything online, and expose to plenty of information. Thus you can say that books are not longer needed in today’s world. I tempt to agree with this statement. Books are old fashion. It’s true they hold a lot of information, and have a vital role for study. But on the other hand, they are too heavy to carry, and have limited information. On a computer or a flash driver, one can hold several of books and magazines. Additionally, our world is moving fast, so there is a huge amount of new information. While digital forms are easy to update on a few hours of editing, it takes time and resources to update a printed book. Moreover, it is much easier to search for information in a digital format. It saves time and money when you study and work. It is better to have trees in the nature. Using trees for making numerous of books and other printed materials, causes the lost of forests, which are a vital natural resource. It is a home of various animals, both tiny insects and large mammalians. It provides fresh air and oxygen needed for all living species. Trees are essential for reducing the global worming and blocking some of the natural disasters we experiencing frequently those days. All in all, computers have changed our life in so many ways. It made life easier and we should use all the advantages they offering.
In the past two decades, with a galloping progress, technology provided us a plethora of innovation to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
our life.
The phrase 'The significant of' is not correct. Use a noun, not an adjective, between 'The' and 'of'.
The significant of
all is the computer, which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allows
us to learn, socialize and have fun. One can find anything online, and expose to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
plenty
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Thus
you can say that
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books
are not longer needed in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
’s world. I tempt to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with this statement.

Books are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
fashion. It’s true they hold
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
, and have a vital role for study.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
on the other hand
, they are too heavy to carry, and have limited
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
. On a computer or a flash driver, one can hold several of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
and magazines.
Additionally
, our world is moving
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
there is a huge amount of new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
. While digital forms are easy to update on a few hours of editing, it takes time and resources to update a printed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
.
Moreover
, it is much easier to search for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
in a digital format. It saves time and money when you study and work.

It is better to have trees in the nature. Using trees for making numerous of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
and other printed materials, causes the lost of forests, which are a vital natural resource. It is a home of various animals, both tiny insects and large mammalians. It provides fresh air and oxygen needed for all living species. Trees are essential for reducing the global worming and blocking
If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?
some of the
natural disasters
Did you mean "we're experiencing", "we are experiencing", or "we were experiencing"?
we experiencing
frequently
those days.

All in all, computers have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
our life in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
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many
ways. It made life
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
easier and
we should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
all the advantages
Did you mean "they're offering", "they are offering", or "they were offering"?
they offering
.
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IELTS essay : books are not needed any more because people can read information on computers.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
277 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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