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Book 12 Test 8 Task 1 Geothermic energy

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The image provides information about the production of electricity from geothermal energy in a geothermal power plant. The process which occurs in the ground prepares what happens on the surface where a condenser, a turbine, a generator and a grid are located. The first step consists of pumping water (H2O) at a low temperature beneath the soil at a depth of 4. 5 kilometres. Cold water reaches a hot area by flowing through an injection well and then rises hotter than descending water because it has been heated in contact with hot rocks situated in the geothermal zone. As it enters a container, H2O changes into steam which sets a turbine in motion creating energy that is finally distributed through a grid. To sum up, while in the lithosphere simple and natural tools are present, on its surface expensive pieces of equipment are necessary to convert kinetic energy (movements of a turbine due to steam) into electricity.
The image provides information about the production of electricity from geothermal energy in a geothermal power plant. The process which occurs in the ground prepares what happens on the surface where a condenser, a turbine, a generator and a grid
are located
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
first
step consists of pumping water (H2O) at a low temperature beneath the soil at a depth of 4. 5
Possible spelling mistake. 'kilometres' is British English.
kilometres
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Cold
water reaches a hot area by flowing through an injection well and then rises hotter than descending water
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it has
been heated
in contact with hot rocks situated in the geothermal zone. As it enters a container, H2O
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
into steam which sets a turbine in motion creating energy
that is
finally
distributed through a grid.

To sum up, while in the lithosphere simple and natural tools are present, on its surface expensive pieces of equipment are necessary to convert kinetic energy (movements of a turbine due to steam) into electricity.

IELTS essay Book 12 Test 8 Task 1 Geothermic energy

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
157 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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