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Because it affords people the opportunity to illustrate which they have seen with more potent details.

Because it affords people the opportunity to illustrate which they have seen with more potent details. p1Lmw
Associating sounds or worlds with pictures develops a new different way of long-lasting and distinction. Besides this, since visual documentaries can stimulate our senses, we tend to value over auditories. As a result, commercial adverts are more toward stories that come along a picture. One of the advantages of pictures is their consistency in the brain. Unlike words that are forgettable, the photo can be attached to the memory based on its particular characteristics. For instance, an image provides precise, valid, and reliable data because of the color, style, and pattern that it has, which leads to distinguish a particular issue. Another significant effect is related to learning. Because it affords people the opportunity to illustrate which they have seen with more potent details.
Associating sounds or worlds with pictures develops a new
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way of long-lasting and distinction.
Besides
this, since visual documentaries can stimulate our senses, we tend to value over
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auditories
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As a result
, commercial adverts are more toward stories that
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come
along a picture.

One of the advantages of pictures is their consistency in the brain. Unlike words that are forgettable, the photo can
be attached
to the memory based on its particular characteristics.
For instance
, an image provides precise, valid, and reliable data
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because
of the color, style, and pattern that it has, which leads to distinguish a particular issue. Another significant effect
is related
to learning.
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it affords
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people
the opportunity to illustrate which they have
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seen
with more potent
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IELTS essay Because it affords people the opportunity to illustrate which they have seen with more potent details.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
124 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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