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Celebrities have detrimental impacts on society. One of the most obvious effects is that they serve as negative role models, which people follow without extensive research. Nowadays, we can see many influencers with unhealthy lifestyles such as lack of sleep, poor diets, or overintense workouts to maintain their bodies. Some famous people even normalize substance use like alcohol and drugs, then the same is followed by their fans. Another factor is that they mislead youngsters by false ideological values. Several people achieve fame without outstanding talents or persistence. For instance, Paris Hilton spends so much time attending parties and nightclubs that she is also called Queen of the Party. Her life promotes the idea that glamorous appearance and media profile are more important than hard work. As a result, many young people try to imitate her with the thought that success is easy to acquire, and schoolwork is not necessary.

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