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As old people says health is wealth. Today's world health has become important point, each country should try to give best treatment without cost but they have not included newly invented medical treatment. They should find alternative way of latest medical treatment. To start with, medical facility improve day by day and its try to cover almost all people. In my country India government has developed occupational health center, and some hospital for free medical checkup, medicine and some others treatment in rural and urban areas. Rural area health center provide free vaccination of new born child and free treatment of pregnant women, so people should take this benefit easily and they have not required to go anywhere for this treatment. In urban area there are many options available for free medical treatment. On the other hand, Latest medical treatments may not be available because its cost is too high. There are many health policies available for expensive treatment and its cove

As old people says health is wealth. Today's world health has become important point, each country should try to give best treatment without cost but they have not included newly invented medical treatment. They should find alternative way of latest medical treatment. To start with, medical facility improve day by day and its try to cover almost all people. In my country India government has developed occupational health center, and some hospital for free medical checkup, medicine and some others treatment in rural and urban areas. Rural area health center provide free vaccination of new born child and free treatment of pregnant women, so people should take this benefit easily and they have not required to go anywhere for this treatment. In urban area there are many options available for free medical treatment. On the other hand, Latest medical treatments may not be available because its cost is too high. There are many health policies available for expensive treatment and its cover all your family member so you have not worried about an expensive bill. However, if some people are not capable to pay premium of health plan then they should not take this treatment. In this case government has to take all this burden, if not taken then someone loose their life because they have not a enough money. Life is more beyond then money. In societies so many charities are available and they are very happy to help a needy people. To sum up, I disagreed with that newly treatment is not included because of its high cost. Life is too precious so no one can loose their life because of money and government has introduced the health card for needy people and its cover almost 80% cost.

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