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As majority of world's water body consists of salt water.

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As majority of world's water body consists of salt water. The shortage of fresh water becomes ever-increasingly worrisome issue. There are multiple of roots that cause the problem and good measurements must be taken to ensure the remain of the basic need of people. Naturally, drought is usually the main cause for the absence of water. Whether it is due to a high temperature or seasonal changes of weather, it is occured by nature alone. However, recently, human activities has intefered with the working of a natural cycle. An assesive usage of water supply in both residential and industrial area are consider to be abnoramlly high, unlike animals or pre-urbanised human. Another major reason for the lack of a useable fresh water is the issue concerning pollution. Even though the water-body itself remains, part of it cannot be consume because of its toxicity. Places like factory or some household do not conduct an appropriate waste fillering method, which causes harzardous substances to be mixed with clean water. On the other hand, there are also various way to solve this problem. A strict law or an efficient measure use to control and regulate the usage of water as well as uncontrolled release of waste into a water area is the most straight forward apporach to the situation. Though, this method has a tangible result, there are a considerable issue regarding the perfomance of govermental officers that might not be able to regulate in every area. Conversely, an interesting method in regards to solving the lack of fresh water is a convertion of salt water, turing them fresh. Some countries are studying on how can fresh water be made using salt water, which is abudant in this world. It would be an essential discovery if the process is succeed and easy to use. To summarize, human activities are mostly the cause for the lack of fresh water. A multitude of measurement are being enforce in order to solve the issue. It is recommended that water should be use moderately and sufficiently.
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majority of
world's
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water
body consists of salt
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water
. The shortage of
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fresh
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water
becomes ever-
increasingly
worrisome
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issue
. There are multiple of roots that
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cause
the problem and
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good
measurements
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must
be taken
to ensure
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the remain
of the basic need of
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people
.

Naturally
, drought is
usually
the main
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cause
for the absence of
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water
. Whether it is due to a high temperature or seasonal
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changes
of weather, it is
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occured
by nature alone.
However
, recently, human activities has
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intefered
with the working of a natural cycle. An
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assesive
usage of
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water
supply in both residential and industrial area are
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consider
to be
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abnoramlly
high, unlike animals or
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pre-urbanised
human. Another major reason for the lack of a useable
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fresh
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water
is the
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issue
concerning pollution.
Even though
the water-body itself remains, part of it cannot be
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consume
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because
of its toxicity. Places like factory or
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some
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household
do not conduct an appropriate waste
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fillering
method, which
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causes
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harzardous
substances to
be mixed
with clean water.

On the other hand
, there are
also
various way to solve this problem. A strict law or an efficient measure
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use
to control and regulate the usage of
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water
as well
as uncontrolled release of waste into a
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water
area is the most straight forward
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apporach
to the situation. Though, this method has a tangible result, there are a considerable
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issue
regarding the
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perfomance
of
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govermental
officers that might not be able to regulate in every area.
Conversely
, an interesting method
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in regards to
solving the lack of
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fresh
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water
is a
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convertion
of salt
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water
,
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turing
them
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fresh
.
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Some
countries are studying on how can
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fresh
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water
be made
using salt
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water
, which is
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abudant
in this world. It would be an essential discovery if the process is
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succeed
and easy to
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use
.

To summarize
, human activities are
mostly
the
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cause
for the lack of
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fresh
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water
. A multitude of measurement are being enforce in order to solve the
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issue
. It
is recommended
that
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water
should be
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use
moderately
and
sufficiently
.
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IELTS essay As majority of world's water body consists of salt water.

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