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artificial intelligence will soon replace teachers in the classroom. do you agree with this statement? what is an alternative to traditional face to face teaching? v.2

artificial intelligence will soon replace teachers in the classroom. what is an alternative to traditional face to face teaching? v. 2
Artificial intelligence has major roles in our everyday lives and education is not an exemption. It is said that devices using AI will be able to teach students instead of real teachers. I believe that this is going to happen sooner or later because of the wide range of interactive learning tools they offer. Also robotics as well as online classrooms offer are some alternative options to conventional teaching. AI will substitute human teachers because it provides a variety of educational methods including interactive ones. These study materials will meet the different students' needs and can be individualized according to their personal preference with each student choosing the method that best suits his abilities. For example, secondary schools are starting to include computer-based sessions in their curricula, in which students learn the same lesson but through different materials chosen by the students themselves. There are two major options to replace a four walls, classroom; robotics and virtual classrooms. Firstly, robots can now be used to perform the same tasks of a teacher. Each student can have his own robot that will be able to teach, explain, and elaborate on lessons as well as helping the student to perform difficult tasks and check his progress. Secondly, with the development of online learning bases, teachers can now arrange online classes which students can attend on a regular base. Those classes simulate real classrooms enabling the students to answer their tutor's questions and interact with each other. For instance, a website called "E2school" provide online English language courses which involve live lessons that students attend on daily bases. In conclusion, I believe that AI will eventually be the preferred method of teaching. Some alternatives to old fashioned teaching include robots which can perform the same job as a human teacher and interactive online classrooms.
Artificial intelligence has major roles in our everyday
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and education is not an exemption. It
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that devices using AI will be able to teach
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students
instead
of real
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teachers
. I believe that this is going to happen sooner or later
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because
of the wide range of interactive learning tools they offer.
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robotics
as well
as
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online
classrooms offer are
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some
alternative options to conventional teaching.

AI will substitute human
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teachers
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because
it provides a variety of educational methods including interactive ones. These study materials will
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meet
the
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different
students' needs and can
be individualized
according to their personal preference with each
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student
choosing the method that best suits his abilities.
For example
, secondary schools are starting to include computer-based sessions in their curricula, in which
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students
learn the same lesson
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but
through
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different
materials chosen by the
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students
themselves.

There are two major options to replace a four walls, classroom; robotics and virtual classrooms.
Firstly
, robots can
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now
be
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used
to perform the same tasks of a
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teacher
. Each
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student
can have his
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own
robot that will be able to teach,
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explain
, and elaborate on lessons
as well
as helping the
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student
to perform difficult tasks and
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check
his progress.
Secondly
, with the development of
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online
learning bases,
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teachers
can
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now
arrange
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online
classes which
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students
can attend on a regular base. Those classes simulate real classrooms enabling the
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students
to answer their tutor's questions and interact with each other.
For instance
, a website called
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E2school
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provide
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online
English language courses which involve
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live
lessons that
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students
attend on daily bases.

In conclusion
, I believe that AI will
eventually
be the preferred method of teaching.
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Some
alternatives to
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old fashioned
teaching include robots which can perform the same job as a human
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teacher
and interactive
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online
classrooms.
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IELTS essay artificial intelligence will soon replace teachers in the classroom. what is an alternative to traditional face to face teaching? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
301 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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