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Art is considered an important part of a society as well as an expression of its culture Do you think it is important for children to be taught art Do you think children should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subjects

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Art is perceived as a vital part of a society with the role that culture plays in the propagation of arts. I am of the opinion that art be parts of children's learning scheme with more emphasis on other subjects however. This essay will discuss two benefits of integrating in children's curriculum and the reason other subjects should be prioritized compared to art. . Firstly, Art improves motor skill because the motions involved boost their motion capability. An illustration of this can be seen when children show much concentration when drawing and painting, they get engaged and their motor ability improves. For instance, at the age of five, drawing and coloring of shapes did not only improve my dexterity but boosted my creative imagination. Secondly, art improves children's confidence and this reflect in their reasoning, charisma and expression ability when they become adults. Therefore, engaging children in art will make them think creatively and also appreciates things better. Regardless of the benefit of arts, priority needs to be given to science because of how nature has immensely benefitted from it. For instance, the study of archaeology led to the discovery of monumental and this monuments have been of great benefits to the world development and humanity. Children tend to become more creative when exposed to science subjects.

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