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Art is consider as part of the cultures throughout the world.However,there are fewer and fewer people appreciate the art and focusing on technology and others.

It’s distinguished people has a favor on a certain activities could make them believe the proper and safe during they are doing their interests. Far beyond that, human progression needs plenty of resources for that could elevate the life quality. The banish of art has been thrived and the consequences have not discovered by the ordinary public. As most people see the results, science do enhance the reality for the modern world. The solution for stop practicing art seen vary the working skills in recently years.
It’s distinguished
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people
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has
a favor on
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a certain activities
could
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make
them believe the proper and safe during they are doing their interests. Far beyond that, human progression needs
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plenty
of resources for that could elevate the life quality.
After ‘The’, do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of ‘banish’ is correct. If ‘banish’ is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
The banish
of art has
been thrived
and the consequences have not discovered by the ordinary public. As most
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people
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see
the results, science do enhance the reality for the modern world. The solution for
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stop
practicing art
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seen
vary the working
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skills
in recently years.

IELTS essay Art is consider as part of the cultures throughout the world. However, there are fewer and fewer people appreciate the art and focusing on technology and others.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
86 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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