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In many countries, prison is the most common solution for crimes. However, many think that better education is the most effective way to prevent people from committing further crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the concurrent world, it is undoubtedly true that prison is considered as basic punishment for criminals. Some people concur that education has great impact on criminals mind set so that they can not commit more crimes where as they also get their confidence back to face the society's racism. However, i quibble from them and prepound that criminals should be changed if they get better environment and education definitely they will change. Adequate evidence are obtainable to substantial the concept of criminals counseling sessions so that they do work for society not against the society. However, education aid them to change their perception towards crime. The top notch concrete reason is bad behavior and hate of society for criminals make them more cruial towards society and to commit crimes again as revenge. Another rational which hauls me to patronise is that only through counseling we get know the reasons behind person who committ numerous crimes. After knowing a whole concept it is easy to decide that which method of punishment aid them to change. So, they do not commit further illegal activities. To upload my nation, i would quote an instance of juvenile delinquency who always come from broken homes which is major reason behind them to commit crime as their parents get separate and no one there to teach them about good and bad of society. Through this child under age of 18 join bad company in which they get wrong instructions to commit crimes. Which is prima facie testimony. Thus, it is clear that education play an essential role for criminals as if they get correct guidance has certainly undeniable. What is half full for some may appear half empty to others. So the public is general tend to distinguish that prison is the best punishment for criminals. Which has multifarious reason to commerce with, some people seem that they are against criminals because they are fearful from them that they will harm them and society Never accept them back. To illustrate, most of the criminal become fearless to commit major crime as they spend time with another criminals in jails and get more motivation to do something big. To conclude, i reiterate that there are innumerable strong factor supporting importantance of education. However it's contrary, can be overlooked or controlled. Consequently, i firmly agree to the given statement.
In the concurrent world, it is
undoubtedly
true that prison
is considered
as basic punishment for
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criminals
.
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people
concur that
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education
has great impact on
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criminals
mind set
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so
that they can not
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commit
more
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crimes
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where as
they
also
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get
their confidence back to face the society's racism.
However
,
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i
quibble from them and
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prepound
that
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criminals
should be
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changed
if they
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get
better environment and
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education
definitely they will
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change
. Adequate evidence are obtainable to substantial the concept of
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criminals
counseling sessions
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so
that they do work for
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society
not against the
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society
.
However
,
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education
aid them to
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change
their perception towards
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crime
. The
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top notch
concrete
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reason
is
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bad
behavior and hate of
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society
for
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criminals
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make
them more
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cruial
towards
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society
and to
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commit
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crimes
again as revenge. Another rational which hauls me to
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patronise
is that
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only
through counseling we
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get
know the
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reasons
behind person who
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committ
numerous
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crimes
.
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After
knowing a whole concept it is easy to decide that which method of punishment aid them to
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change
.
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So
, they do not
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commit
further
illegal activities. To upload my nation,
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i
would quote an instance of juvenile delinquency who always
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come
from broken homes which is major
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reason
behind them to
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commit
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crime
as their parents
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get
separate and no one there to teach them about
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good
and
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bad
of
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society
. Through this child under age of 18
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join
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bad
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company
in which they
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get
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wrong
instructions to
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commit
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crimes
. Which is prima facie testimony.
Thus
, it is
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clear
that
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education
play an essential role for
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criminals
as if they
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get
correct guidance has
certainly
undeniable. What is half full for
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some
may appear half empty to others.
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So
the public is general tend to distinguish that prison is the best punishment for
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criminals
. Which has multifarious
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reason
to commerce with,
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some
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people
seem that they are against
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criminals
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because
they are fearful from them that they will harm them and
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society
Never accept them back. To illustrate, most of the
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criminal
become fearless to
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commit
major
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crime
as they spend time with another
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criminals
in jails and
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get
more motivation to do something
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big
.
To conclude
,
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i
reiterate that there are innumerable strong factor supporting
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importantance
of
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education
.
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However
it's contrary, can
be overlooked
or controlled.
Consequently
,
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i
firmly
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to the
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IELTS essay In many countries, prison is the most common solution for crimes. However, many think that better education is the most effective way to prevent people from committing further crime.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
392 words
5.5
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