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Are electric cars a replacement for those powered by fossil fuels?

Are electric cars a replacement for those powered by fossil fuels? E3dAL
Electric cars are currently being developed by many well-known automotive companies. Many people still question whether electric cars are a feasible replacement for petrol and diesel-fuelled vehicles. In this essay, I will explore the opinions for and against the use of electric cars and their replacement of petrol and diesel-fuelled cars. On one hand, electric cars are environmentally friendly. Not only are they powered by renewable energy sources, but they are clean to run and maintain on the road. To support this opinion, recent studies show that the use of electric cars helps to minimize pollution in urban and rural areas. Clearly, electric cars are one way to tackle ecological concerns and support a ‘greener’ environment. On the other hand, electric cars are inconvenient to maintain and to dispose of. The driver of an electric vehicle must recharge his car approximately every 100 kilometres. In addition, the plutonium battery of an electric car is toxic to the environment and must be safely disposed of through expensive means. In brief, scientists are still exploring ways to produce these types of vehicles so that they are easier to manufacture, maintain and use safely. To sum up, it is evident that there are both pros and cons in the development of electric vehicles. Despite the expense of development and the inconvenience of recharging electric cars, I strongly believe that continuing with the research and production of these vehicles is well worth the investment and that we should remain supportive to the use of electric cars and to their development in the future.
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are a feasible replacement for petrol and diesel-fuelled
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. In this essay, I will explore the opinions for and against the
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and their replacement of petrol and diesel-fuelled cars.

On one hand,
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to minimize pollution in urban and rural areas.
Clearly
,
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are one way to tackle ecological concerns and support a ‘greener’ environment.

On the other hand
,
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are inconvenient to maintain and to dispose of. The driver of an
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approximately every 100
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In addition
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is toxic to the environment and
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disposed of through expensive means.
In brief
, scientists are
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so
that they are easier to manufacture, maintain and
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To sum up, it is evident that there are both pros and cons in the development of
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electric
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vehicles
. Despite the expense of development and the inconvenience of recharging
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cars
, I
strongly
believe that continuing with the research and production of these
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vehicles
is well worth the investment and that we should remain supportive to the
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and to their development in the future.
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IELTS essay Are electric cars a replacement for those powered by fossil fuels?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
259 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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