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Appreciation: A cruel fact of civilized societies.

Appreciation: A cruel fact of civilized societies. r8GlJ
We are living in a modern and civilized socities but we are gradually decline our moral values in which the most vibrant element of this era is Appreciation that boost the confidence level and encourage people to build appropriate relationship among them. It also associated to increase the productivity of man power. Appreciation is a term reffers to praise people on their efforts. For instance, If parents figured out their child brought a school performance report almost satisfactory instead of saying that you have showed up your potential / done a wonderfull job or you gave your best shot and etc, their parents emphasis on the only one minor mistake that would be get better by some more hardwork. However, all the hardships their child have gone through to achieve this outcomes gone in vain. Although, wether it's educational level or in a professional work these circumstances are remain same. people put their soul in works to achieved the outstanding outcomes from their performances is worthless for the others. Moreover, there are various factors like status of life, Jealousy, to see people in a pathetic state, race to pushing people into the poverty and so far. These components drastically increased among socities for the sake of being hang with Elite Class standards and restricted to show their optimism intentions to others. But lately, It is observed a number of people those are confined by their own wall of status and wealth which hold them to utilized certain motivational phrases for people to depicts their potential capabilities. Thus, this is unfortunate to say that Appreciation is indeed a word which we will only be found in the dictionary if those phenomenon are kept constant. In the end, I would like to assert that as being human we have to show some affection towards others and make the socities a better place to live not just for upper class people but as well as for people who played essential role to made us richer or provide man power to raise our standards of life.
We are living in a modern and civilized socities
but
we are
gradually
decline
our moral values in which the most vibrant element of this era is Appreciation that boost the confidence level and encourage
people
to build appropriate relationship among them. It
also
associated to increase the productivity of
man
power.

Appreciation is a term
reffers
to praise
people
on their efforts.
For instance
, If parents figured out their child brought a school performance report almost satisfactory
instead
of saying that you have
showed
up your potential / done a
wonderfull
job or you gave your best shot
and etc
, their parents emphasis on the
only
one minor mistake that would be
get
better by
some
more
hardwork
.
However
, all the hardships their child have gone through to achieve
this
outcomes gone in vain. Although,
wether
it's educational level
or in a professional work these circumstances are
remain
same.
people
put their soul in works
to achieved
the outstanding outcomes from their performances is worthless for the others.

Moreover
, there are various factors like status of life, Jealousy, to
see
people
in a pathetic state, race to pushing
people
into the poverty and
so
far. These components
drastically
increased among
socities
for the sake of being
hang
with Elite
Class
standards and restricted to
show
their optimism intentions to others.

But
lately, It
is observed
a number of
people
those
are confined
by their
own
wall of status and wealth which hold them to utilized certain motivational phrases for
people
to
depicts
their potential capabilities.
Thus
, this is unfortunate to say that Appreciation is
indeed
a word which we will
only
be found
in the dictionary if
those phenomenon
are
kept
constant.

In the
end
, I would like to assert that as being human we
have to
show
some
affection towards others and
make
the
socities
a better place to
live
not
just
for upper
class
people
but
as well
as for
people
who played essential role to made us richer or provide
man
power to raise our standards of life.
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IELTS essay Appreciation: A cruel fact of civilized societies.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
342 words
6.0
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