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My name is Suzan saber and I would like to express my interest in applying For the scholarship program in political science. I am looking forward to pursue a Career in politics, and I am assure that SBW will help me to achieve that During this time, I studies at the faculty of commerce but I am passionate about politics. This passion started when I studied geopolitics in the last year of high school, I really enjoyed knowing the political problems and the political systems around the world. Hence, courses like Democracy, citizenship and public policy analysis would give me more insight into how politics is affected in the world today by many factors. I would like to have the opportunity to learn more about politics. Politics is a passion that drives me to continue to make me study abroad where I believe that this scholarship program will enable me to take my skills and knowledge to the next level. For the past three years i was in organization team in my school, i volunteered in charity works and this taught me a lot of useful things for instance, being a team player and more responsible person, which was a very useful experience for me and also, I am a volunteer in Alexandria Sporting Club to organize events for kids learning them how to depend on themselves. I am seeking an opportunity for this scholarship due to my financial difficulties and this scholarship offers me the chance to study what I am enthusiastic about and to achieve my goal which is to work as a politician, in addition to this I want to serve my country and to transfer all the knowledge I have learnt. I am confident that my thirst and curiosity for knowledge will be a good foundation for the scholarship program. As I mentioned, I can't afford the price of German courses in my country due to my financial issues. However, I’m trying to learn it individually using online sources and watching professional German tutors. Germany is considered on of the most developed countries in the world and for it’s well known educational system for the international students, for this reason I am looking forward to register in this program in one of the most beneficial universities in the world.

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