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Applying for master degree

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Gladly I was motivated by my former university teacher Mr. Havraz Khedhir (who completed his master program in Budapest University) to apply for Stipendum Hangaricum scholarship programme, due to the fact that Hangary always offered an internationally recognised high-quality education, and that it has some of the top educators and academics in the world that learning from them would be an amazing and excellent opportunity for me, furthermore due to providing a civil and safe environment that is respectful to the rights, well-being, responsibility and dignity of all of it's members. Therefore, without hesitation I immediately recognised that this is where I would want to obtain my master's degree and to take up as my next academic programme, as well as the admission into this programme would be a step towards becoming a better and more educated civil engineer.
Gladly
I
was motivated
by my former university teacher Mr.
Havraz
Khedhir
(who completed his master program in Budapest University) to apply for
Stipendum
Hangaricum
scholarship
programme
, due to the fact that
Hangary
always offered an
internationally
recognised
high-quality education, and that it has
some of the
top educators and academics in the world that learning from them would be an amazing and excellent opportunity for me,
furthermore
due to providing a civil and safe environment
that is
respectful to the rights, well-being, responsibility and dignity of all
of it's members
.

Therefore
, without hesitation I immediately
recognised
that this is where I would want to obtain my master's degree and to take up as my
next
academic
programme
,
as well
as the admission into this
programme
would be a step towards becoming a better and more educated civil engineer.

IELTS essay Applying for master degree

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