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Animals should be protect or not

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People argued that government should protect the endangered or threatened animals other argued that protection of animals are so expensive sothat government allocate money for human being rather than maintaining animals. I disagree above this statement. To begin with, ego system are being affected because of brink extinction. Human population are more than double moreover, to maintain their extinction human are attempting to deforestation. Even though many animals are in captivity in zoos, they lost their life style and instinction such as how to hunt, poach and prey. Caged animals lost their freedom and liberty. . if they cramped in cage, they face problem about mating and reproduce creatures. animal is a process ithey are undergo severe suffering, when they are tested for atomic nuclear and cosmetics. eventhough UK has long been banned for animal products' cosmetics, there are so many animals products in the market. People who live alone in city they like to rare animals to avoid curbing loneliness and security purpose. Wild life came depression though they cooped in a small cage. People use animals for eating, hunting, testing the medication. To conclude, animals are important to balance biodiversity.
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argued that
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government
should protect the endangered or threatened
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animals
other argued that protection of
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animals
are
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so
expensive
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sothat
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government
allocate money for human being
rather
than maintaining
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animals
. I disagree above this statement. To
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begin
with, ego system are being
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affected
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because
of brink extinction. Human population are more than double
moreover
, to maintain their extinction human are attempting to deforestation.
Even though
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many
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animals
are in captivity in zoos, they lost their
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life
style and
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instinction
such as how to hunt, poach and prey. Caged
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animals
lost their freedom and liberty.
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.
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if
they cramped in cage, they face problem about mating and reproduce creatures.
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animal
is a process
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ithey
are
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severe suffering, when they are
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tested
for atomic nuclear and cosmetics.
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eventhough
UK has long
been banned
for
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animal
products' cosmetics, there are
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so
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many
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animals
products in the market.
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People
who
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live
alone in city they like to rare
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animals
to avoid curbing loneliness and security purpose. Wild life came depression though they cooped in a
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small
cage.
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People
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use
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animals
for eating, hunting, testing the medication.
To conclude
,
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animals
are
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important
to balance biodiversity.
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IELTS essay Animals should be protect or not

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
192 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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