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Animals are in danger of extinction.Some people think that only safe animals, which are safe for everyone.Do you agree or disagree?

Animals are in danger of extinction. Some people think that only safe animals, which are safe for everyone. g8NrA

Nowadays wild animals are in danger of extinction. A number of masses believe that only must useful animals are protected. On the contrary, according to me all species should be safe. I will discuss both views in my upcoming paragraphs. To begin with, there are a plethora reason why all animals must saving. Predominately, Every species plays a paramount role on the earth. Owing to the fact that, these creatures create the directly and indirectly. To cite an example, the bats are useful also. Since nowadays there are so many incest on the earth, these bats help keep the population of incest. If bats are die, then they will destroy the crops. So, we will have nothing to eat. Besides this, there are various creatures, who do care of plants. Due to the fact, they are eat the incest incests, which is so dangerous for plants. Probing ahead, a plethora animals helps for testing also. For instance, monkeys helps for testing new medicine. Since they have most ability for receive new medicine, as compared to the humans. To recapitulate, animals are most significant in our the earth. In lite of the reason that, it also feel the pain.

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animals
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danger
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only
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must
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are protected
. On the contrary
, according to me all species should be safe. I will discuss both views in my upcoming paragraphs.

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begin
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animals
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must
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, Every species plays a paramount role on the earth. Owing to the fact that, these creatures create the directly
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. To cite an example, the bats are useful also
. Since nowadays there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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many incest
 on the earth, these bats This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 the population of incest. If bats are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :pass away
die
, then they will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishruin
destroy
 the crops. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, we will have nothing to eat. Besides
 this, there are various creatures, who do care of plants. Due to the fact, they are Consider using a past participle here: "eaten".eaten
eat
 the incest Possible spelling mistake found.investsingestsinfestsincestincents
incests
, which is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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dangerous
 for plants.

Probing ahead, a plethora You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
animals
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 for testing also
. For instance
, monkeys This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 for testing new medicine. Since they have most ability for receive new medicine, as compared to the humans.

To recapitulate, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
animals
 are most significant in our the earth. In lite of the reason that, it also
Did you mean "feels"?feels
feel
 the pain. 