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Angry boss which annoys his employees

Angry boss which annoys his employees YdNPQ

There was a company called legend near a wharf where many people worked But unfortunately the manager of that company only snubbed his employees And exposing their foolish actions, which were not intentional And did not maintaine the financial needs of the company's employees on time And he never amended his bad behaviors Until the employees of that company could not endure such insults And they warthed with him like an angry bear Finally, after much pondering, they decided and They did a derastic deal to bring about justice And one by one, they voted and filled out their ballot paper, and since everyone was against their boss, they resigned from that baseless company.

There was a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 called legend near a wharf where This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 worked This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 unfortunately the manager of that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 snubbed his employees And exposing their foolish actions, which were not intentional And did not Possible spelling mistake found.maintainmaintainedmaintainsmaintainermaintain e
maintaine
 the financial needs of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
's employees on time And he never amended his This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 behaviors Until the employees of that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 could not endure such insults And they Possible spelling mistake found.earthed
warthed
 with him like an angry bear Finally
, after much pondering, they Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).decided, and
decided and
 They did a Possible spelling mistake found.drastic
derastic
 deal to bring about justice

And one by one, they voted and filled out their ballot paper, and since everyone was against their boss, they resigned from that baseless You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
. 