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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problem does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?

An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problem does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation? enOx
A well-trained professional from medical, engineering and teaching profession are getting a lots of attraction from high-paid developed countries because of recommended and recognition with other life long benefits, which leaves their own developing or under-developed countries with unskilled professionals to run a race with others. Because of this brain draining from native countries, it is slowing the development pace and shrinking opportunities to bloom with every small steps. By loosing these kind of high-professionals, standard of living eventually decline with their country's economical situation and that will result in pushing already done development to more years back. If well-trained processional from education sector will escalate then new generation will not be able to learn from better experiences from their teachers for bright future and what will be the future without this vivid development in fresh talented children who are one single hope to move further in this development race. To retain these skilled professionals from different domain to their own native countries, their nation need to recognize and give liable benefits with upscaling their payrolls by almost their actual talent and skill sets. By tiny spotlight on their actual efforts towards their nation's future to enhance and improvise, will encourage their own ability to do better for their native country without expecting more in return. By doing this small steps, nation can prevent their present and future at the same time and this ambidextrous efforts will bring their development and live scale to the bright side.
A well-trained professional from medical, engineering and teaching profession are getting
a lots
of attraction from high-paid developed
countries
because
of recommended and recognition with other life long benefits, which
leaves
their
own
developing or under-developed
countries
with unskilled professionals to run a race with others.

Because of this
brain draining from native
countries
, it is slowing the
development
pace and shrinking opportunities to bloom with every
small
steps. By loosing
these kind
of high-professionals, standard of living
eventually
decline with their country's
economical
situation and that will result in pushing already done
development
to more years back. If well-trained processional from education sector will escalate then new generation will not be able to learn from better experiences from their teachers for bright
future
and what will be the
future
without this vivid
development
in fresh talented children who are one single hope to
move
further
in this
development
race.

To retain these skilled professionals from
different
domain to their
own
native
countries
, their nation need to recognize and give liable benefits with
upscaling
their payrolls by almost their actual talent and
skill
sets. By tiny spotlight on their actual efforts towards their nation's
future
to enhance and improvise, will encourage their
own
ability to do better for their native
country
without expecting more in return.

By doing this
small
steps, nation can
prevent
their present and
future
at the same time and this ambidextrous efforts will bring their
development
and
live
scale to the bright side.
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IELTS essay An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problem does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?

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