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An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individual and companies to shopping online.?

An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individual and companies to shopping online. ? 0J25
In present numerous youngsters are pursuing a clothes, Glossary on internet market. Various observation on shed a light on positive and negative aspects of it. There are many positive influences of online market shopping. One of the most convicting factor I feel is that everyone go to connected on online shopping for different types of buying. This view exist because today is market of online all people are using internet even who connected with scoial application likes facebooks, Instagram etc. As a result people are one click on the phone their are various kind of product show the screen. Furthermore, we cannot ignored the reality that some user to going to Google site their are lost of new styel even market shopping discount offer are highly. Even so many times save time for travel, likes and dislikes. Consequences nowaday many people like Amazon sites it's one of the best application to shopping all products. However, drawbacks are not far behind the most determine impact is that many scam & Frowd are facing some people. My observation is vaild as on the internet showing a good product but pursue the product but after home delevery to changed products & materials. As consequences many person are not like to purchasing online store. Few day ago in newspaper on scam story I'm reading. In phone box is not in phone but in box it's on soaps. In conclusion future generation are atttached on internet so all 80 per cent population are buying in online sites and it would be fortunate for consuming time and money.
In present numerous youngsters are pursuing
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a clothes
, Glossary on internet
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market
. Various observation on shed a light on
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positive
and
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negative
aspects of it.

There are
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many
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positive
influences of
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online
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market
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shopping
. One of the most convicting factor I feel is that everyone go to connected on
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online
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shopping
for
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different
types of buying. This view exist
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because
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today
is
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market
of
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online
all
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people
are using internet even who connected with
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scoial
application
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likes
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facebooks
, Instagram etc.
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As
a result
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people
are one click on the phone
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their
are various kind of
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product
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show
the screen.
Furthermore
, we cannot
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ignored
the reality that
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some
user to going to Google site
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their
are lost
of new
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styel
even
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market
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shopping
discount offer are
highly
. Even
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so
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many
times save time for travel,
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likes
and dislikes. Consequences
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nowaday
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many
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people
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like
Amazon sites
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it's
one of the best application to
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shopping
all products.

However
, drawbacks are not far behind the most determine impact is that
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many scam
&
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Frowd
are facing
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some
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people
. My observation is
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vaild
as on the internet showing a
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good
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product
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but
pursue the
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product
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but
after home
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delevery
to
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changed
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products
& materials.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
consequences
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many person
are not
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like
to purchasing
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online
store. Few day ago in newspaper on scam story I'm reading. In phone box is not in phone
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but
in box it's on soaps.

In conclusion
future generation are
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atttached
on internet
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so
all 80 per cent population are buying in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
sites and it would be fortunate for consuming time and money.

IELTS essay An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individual and companies to shopping online. ?

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