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an essay about a country that I want to visit.

an essay about a country that I want to visit. WBkk
There is lot of interesting and beautiful countries in the world but since I am intersted in the asian culture tradition and history I would like to visit korea. fisrt of all, I want to visit korean to see the traditionl palaces and places with that awsome architecture and fascinating colors. and to discover more about itImprovingmy korean langue is one of the essential reasons to visit this country because I can comunicate wit native speankers and also learn from theme about there culture and may be I could find some interstiong books in korean that are not available in my country And finally food beacause of its diversity between modern and tradinal dishes and there amsing look that make extremly eager to try it like bulgugi wich is mad by meat and riz and vegetables. It was only for royal family in old times, and also iwant to try street food with fish in Busan. traveling is one the most enjoyable things to do but it may be difficult witout having a lot of money and confusing when the does not for sure where to go.
There is
lot of
interesting and
beautiful
countries in the world
but
since I am
intersted
in the
asian
culture tradition and history I would like to visit
korea
.
fisrt
of all, I want to visit
korean
to
see
the
traditionl
palaces and places with that
awsome
architecture and fascinating colors.
and
to discover more about
itImprovingmy
korean
langue
is one of the essential reasons to visit this country
because
I can
comunicate
wit native
speankers
and
also
learn from theme about there culture and
may be
I could find
some
interstiong
books in
korean
that are not available in my country And
finally
food
beacause
of its diversity between modern and
tradinal
dishes and there
amsing
look that
make
extremly
eager to try it like
bulgugi
wich
is mad by meat and
riz
and vegetables. It was
only
for royal family in
old
times, and
also
iwant
to try street food with fish in
Busan
.
traveling
is
one
the most enjoyable things to do
but
it may be difficult
witout
having
a lot of
money and confusing when the does not for sure where to go.
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IELTS essay an essay about a country that I want to visit.

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