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In my lifestyle, no matter how busy I am, I always find time to relax and do what I love. But one activity which I like to do whenever I have some time to spare is to hang out with my friend. Hanging out with friends, having whole lots of activities such as hanging out at the mall, catching some rays, chatting about everything, chowing down at a fast-food joint, going to the cafe, catching the flick, etc. totally depends on our mood. We don't really plan anything, just follow the mood. I have two friends with who I always hang out. both of them are my high school friend, We both get along very well until now. We are both very busy with school but we always try to make time for each other. This is my favorite free time activity because It’s a simple, practical, and not an expensive activity to do. Hanging out with my friends, I'm able to discharge all the negative feelings by sharing my stories, making jokes, and talking about anything. It's great to have some friends who share a lot in common with me and is willing to support me when I need them.
In my lifestyle, no matter how busy I am, I always find
time
to relax and do what I
love
.
But
one
activity
which I like to do whenever I have
some
time
to spare is to hang out with my
friend
. Hanging out with
friends
, having whole lots of
activities
such as hanging out at the mall, catching
some
rays, chatting about everything, chowing down at a
fast
-food joint, going to the
cafe
, catching the flick, etc.
totally
depends on our mood. We don't
really
plan anything,
just
follow the mood. I have two
friends
with
who
I always hang out.
both
of them are my high school
friend
, We both
get
along
very
well until
now
. We are both
very
busy with school
but
we always try to
make
time
for each other. This is my favorite free
time
activity
because
It’s a simple, practical, and not an expensive
activity
to do. Hanging out with my
friends
, I'm able to discharge all the
negative
feelings by sharing my stories, making jokes, and talking about anything. It's great to have
some
friends
who share a lot in common with me and is willing to support me when I need them.
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IELTS essay an activities in my free time

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201 words
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