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Am every day go out with my friend .every day we go for fun play games ,watch movies and other things. I really like spent my time with my friends . My best friend in my school time her name is pawan . Am meet her in 8th class when she get new in my school am already study there before her addimission. That first when I meet her and thereafter sher is my best friend. She is only my school time best friend. No am not so much friendly with my neighbors. Am feel comfortable deal with my neighbors that I think I have not good relationships with my neighbors. Thats very deficult question for me. I think both . I think home made family members and their relationships. If family is not there it is just home brick .the otherside friend is very important rule in my life .because many time I have talk some thingsvwith my friends that I can't share with my family .so my answer is family and friends they both are very important for me.

Am every day go out with my friend. every day we go for fun play games, watch movies and other things. I really like spent my time with my friends. My best friend in my school time her name is pawan. Am meet her in 8th class when she get new in my school am already study there before her addimission. That first when I meet her and thereafter sher is my best friend. She is only my school time best friend. No am not so much friendly with my neighbors. Am feel comfortable deal with my neighbors that I think I have not good relationships with my neighbors. Thats very deficult question for me. I think both. I think home made family members and their relationships. If family is not there it is just home brick. the otherside friend is very important rule in my life. because many time I have talk some thingsvwith my friends that I can't share with my family. so my answer is family and friends they both are very important for me. MMoKe
Am every day go out with my friend. every day we go for fun play games, watch movies and other things. I really like spent my time with my friends. My best friend in my school time her name is pawan. Am meet her in 8th class when she get new in my school am already study there before her addimission. That first when I meet her and thereafter sher is my best friend. She is only my school time best friend. No am not so much friendly with my neighbors. Am feel comfortable deal with my neighbors that I think I have not good relationships with my neighbors. Thats very deficult question for me. I think both. I think home made family members and their relationships. If family is not there it is just home brick. the otherside friend is very important rule in my life. because many time I have talk some thingsvwith my friends that I can't share with my family. so my answer is family and friends they both are very important for me.
Am every day go out with my
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pawan
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both. I
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home made
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the
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otherside
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thingsvwith
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so
my answer is
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and
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IELTS essay Am every day go out with my friend. every day we go for fun play games, watch movies and other things. I really like spent my time with my friends. My best friend in my school time her name is pawan. Am meet her in 8th class when she get new in my school am already study there before her addimission. That first when I meet her and thereafter sher is my best friend. She is only my school time best friend. No am not so much friendly with my neighbors. Am feel comfortable deal with my neighbors that I think I have not good relationships with my neighbors. Thats very deficult question for me. I think both. I think home made family members and their relationships. If family is not there it is just home brick. the otherside friend is very important rule in my life. because many time I have talk some thingsvwith my friends that I can't share with my family. so my answer is family and friends they both are very important for me.

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178 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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