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Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.

Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. 7q8y
the traditional virtue of telling the truth in all situations is increasingly doubted by many in today’s world. many believe that telling the truth is not always the best policy when dealing with people. moreover, the line of a “truth” is becoming more and more vague. this essay will explore the importance of telling the truth in relationships between people. we all understand that often the truth is offending and may not be a very nice thing to both hear or say. lies or white lies often have their advantages. the manipulation of white lies is the most obvious the business world. how many times have we heard that some product is “the finest” or “the cheapest”? how many times have we heard that products have such and such “magical functions”? advertising is about persuasion, and many would agree that if a company is to tell the absolute truth about it’s products, no one would be interested in even having a look at the products. the same logic applies to human relationships. if your friend had worn a newly purchased dress on her birthday and energetically asked you if it was a worthy buy, would you freely express your opinion that you had never seen a dress as the one she’s currently wearing? and spoil her birthday? unarguably, hiding(entirely or particially) the truth in some situations can be quite handy indeed. confrontations and disputes can seemingly be avoided. however, there is always the risk factor of the truth emerging sooner or later when telling an untruth. the basic trust in any relationships(businessman/customer, friends, parents/children) will be blotched, and would have an impact on the future relationship between both parties. the story of the “the boy who cried wolf” fully illustrates the consequenes of telling untruths. no one will believe you when you’re telling the truth. your word will have no weighting. in addition, another “bad factor” of telling untruths is that you have absolutely no control over when the truth(of previous untruths) will emerge. untruths breed pain in both parties: tears when the truth is uncovered after a period of time; fear and the burden of sharing a “secret”. in the long run, it seems that hiding the truth is not beneficial to either party. everyone hates betrayal. even if it is the trend to occasionally hide the truth in relationships, it is strongly recommended that not to follow that trend as the risk and the consequences of the truth unfolded overwhelms the minimal advantages one can derive from not telling the truth. afterall, it is understood that relationships are founded on “trust” which goes hand in hand with “truth”. indeed telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. always.
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the
traditional virtue of
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telling
the
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truth
in all situations is
increasingly
doubted by
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many
in

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today
’s world.
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many
believe that
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telling
the
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truth
is not always the best policy when dealing with

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people
.
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moreover
, the line of a
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“truth”
is becoming more and more vague.
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this
essay will explore

the importance of
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telling
the
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truth
in
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relationships
between
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people
.

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we
all understand that
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often
the
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truth
is offending and may not be a
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very
nice thing to both hear or

say.
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lies
or white lies
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often
have their advantages.
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the
manipulation of white lies is the most

obvious the business world.
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how
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many
times have we heard that
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some
product is “the finest” or

“the cheapest”?
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how
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many
times have we heard that products have such and such “magical

functions”?
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advertising
is about persuasion, and
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many
would
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agree
that if a
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company
is to
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tell
the

absolute
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truth
Did you mean "about its products"?
about it’s products
, no one would
be interested
in even having a look at the

products.

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the
same logic
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applies to
human
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relationships
.
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if
your friend had worn a
newly
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purchased
dress

on her birthday and
energetically
asked you if it was a worthy
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buy
, would you
freely
express your

opinion that you had never
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seen
a dress as the one she’s
currently
wearing?
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and
spoil her

birthday?
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unarguably
, hiding(
entirely
or
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particially
) the
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truth
in
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some
situations can be quite

handy
indeed
.
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confrontations
and disputes can
seemingly
be avoided
.

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however
, there is always the
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risk
factor of the
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truth
emerging sooner or later when
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telling
an

untruth.
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the
basic trust in any relationships(businessman/customer, friends, parents/children) will

be blotched
, and would have an impact on the future
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relationship
between both parties.
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the
story

of
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the “the
boy who cried wolf”
fully
illustrates the
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consequenes
of
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telling
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untruths
.
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no
one will

believe you when you’re
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telling
the
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truth
.
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your
word will have no weighting.

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in
addition, another “
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bad
factor” of
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telling
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untruths
is that you have
absolutely
no control over

when the truth(of previous
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untruths)
will emerge.
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untruths
breed pain in both parties: tears when

the
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truth
is uncovered
after a period of time; fear and the burden of sharing a “secret”.
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in
the long

run, it seems that hiding the
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truth
is not beneficial to either party.

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everyone
hates betrayal.
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even
if it is the trend to
occasionally
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hide
the
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truth
in
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relationships
, it is

strongly
recommended that not to follow that trend as the
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risk
and the consequences of the truth

unfolded overwhelms the minimal advantages one can derive from not
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telling
the
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truth
.
Did you mean "after all"?
afterall
, it

is understood
that
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relationships
are founded
on “trust” which goes hand in hand with “truth”.

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indeed
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telling
the
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truth
is the most
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important
consideration in any
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relationship
between
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people
.

The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
always
.
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IELTS essay Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
455 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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