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Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lessen pressure on the world’s fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lessen pressure on the world’s fuel resources. with this statement? 3P0X
Fuel is considered as one of the prominent resources for manufacturing process. While the fuel reserves are limited and may be depleted after some point in time, a lot of people opine that rising the price of the fuel is the apt way to control its consumption and preserve the resources for future. Although I agree with this theory of fuel preservation, I believe there are other options available to various economies for prevention of these valuable resources. Non-renewable resources such as petrol and diesel are very scarce and only supplied by few countries around the world. There has been a spurt is demand for these fuels post World War II, due to increase in industrialisation in many countries. Countries with abundant supply of oil have increased the price to control the demand and preserve the fuel for future generations. This Economic Theory of Pricing has helped to contain the demand to certain extent, however many developed economies having enough capital to buy the fuel, have not reduced the demand. There are many other alternatives that could be followed to prevent the depletion of the resources. Usage of renewable resources in place of non-renewable resources have been adopted by many economies. This increase in usage of the substitutes have led to decline in demand of fuels as well as reduction in the pollution. Moreover, change in technology can also be adopted to decrease in the demand for oils. For instance, many countries have promoted the usage of electric vehicles which will not only help in reduction in the demand of fuels but also prevent the pollution which is caused from release of harmful gases from the vehicles. In conclusion, I agree with the idea that increase in the pricing might help in the reduction in demand of fuels. However, for some countries where pricing might not be an issue, other methods like using of substitutes and change in technology might be adopted to contain the demand.
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as one of the prominent resources for manufacturing process. While the
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fuel
reserves
are limited
and may
be depleted
after
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some
point in time,
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people
opine that rising the price of the
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fuel
is the apt way to control its consumption and preserve the resources for future. Although I
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agree
with this theory of
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fuel
preservation, I believe there are other options available to various economies for prevention of these valuable resources.

Non-renewable resources such as petrol and diesel are
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very
scarce and
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only
supplied by few
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countries
around the world. There has been a spurt is
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demand
for these
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fuels
post World War II, due to increase in
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industrialisation
in
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many
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countries
.
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Countries
with abundant supply of oil have increased the price to control the
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demand
and preserve the
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fuel
for future generations. This Economic Theory of Pricing has
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helped
to contain the
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demand
to certain extent,
however
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many
developed economies having
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enough
capital to
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buy
the
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, have not
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reduced
the demand.

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other alternatives that could
be followed
to
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prevent
the depletion of the resources. Usage of renewable resources in place of non-renewable resources have
been adopted
by
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many
economies. This increase in usage of the substitutes have led to decline in
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demand
of
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fuels
as well
as reduction in the pollution.
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,
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change
in technology can
also
be adopted
to decrease in the
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demand
for oils.
For instance
,
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many
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countries
have promoted the usage of electric vehicles which will not
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only
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help
in reduction in the
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of
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fuels
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also
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prevent
the pollution which
is caused
from release of harmful gases from the vehicles.

In conclusion
, I
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agree
with the
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idea
that increase in the pricing might
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help
in the reduction in
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demand
of
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fuels
.
However
, for
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some
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countries
where pricing might not be an issue, other methods like using of substitutes and
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change
in technology might
be adopted
to contain the
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demand
.
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IELTS essay Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lessen pressure on the world’s fuel resources. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
326 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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