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Although nowadays people are reading news through internet, newspaper still remains of value. Do you agree or disagree?

Although nowadays people are reading news through internet, newspaper still remains of value. QEQ1
In modern era, people believe that learning news from newspaper are still vital compere to internet. I completely disagree with the statement. I this essay i shall discuss the importance of E-newspaper instead of paper news. There are a number of reasons regarding the pivotal of internet news in people life, to begin with, technology is increasing day by day and people are moving step by step with technical advisement. People are reading news through mobile internet in any place at any time. For instance, individual are collecting news from work and even they save news at phone like screenshot. Moreover, they can access news without any cost such as online apps like E-paper, where they can any read newspaper like tribune news, state news. Apart from that, paperless news are Eco-friendly instead paper news. On the other hand, some people think that paper news are necessary due some reasons. First, all age group can not use internet news, old once feel hard to read E-news, they prefer paper news. What is more, no technical equipment is needed to read paper news. To add in it, newspaper always have coupons and advertisement of store having sales. To encapsulate, I reiterate my opinion that, internet are king nowadays compare to newspaper, however, some people argue that paper news are still important.
In modern era,
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believe that learning
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from
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newspaper
are
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vital
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to internet. I completely disagree with the statement.
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this essay
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shall discuss the importance of E-newspaper
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the pivotal of
internet
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news
in
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people
life, to
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begin
with, technology is increasing day by day and
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people
are moving step by step with technical advisement.
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People
are reading
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news
through mobile internet in any place at any time.
For instance
, individual are collecting
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news
from work and even they save
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news
at phone like screenshot.
Moreover
, they can access
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news
without any cost such as online apps like E-paper, where they can any read
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newspaper
like tribune
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news
, state
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news
. Apart from that, paperless
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news
are Eco-friendly
instead
paper news.

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,
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think
that paper
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news
are necessary due
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some
reasons.
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, all age group can not
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use
internet
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news
,
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old
once feel
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hard
to read E-news, they prefer paper
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news
.
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, no technical equipment
is needed
to read paper
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news
. To
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add
in it,
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always have coupons and
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store having sales.

To encapsulate, I reiterate my opinion that, internet are king nowadays compare to
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,
however
,
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some
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people
argue that paper
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news
are
still
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important
.
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IELTS essay Although nowadays people are reading news through internet, newspaper still remains of value.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
220 words
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