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All education should be free to all people and pasid and maneged by the government

All education should be free to all people and pasid and maneged by the government QLR1P
In the ultramodern, epoch it is the point of debate on the government should pay free for education and manage it education play a very important role in every individual. Hey this notion remains successful in keeping the majority in this favour the upcoming paragraph would cast shade on my argument related to very conception I totally wholehearted concur with the statement literacy is very important for everyone firstly, if the government will provide free culture then everyone can get an scholarship, in, addition the world search showed that which agrarian has lack of source of education those countries economy is very down Secondly many people have not many money to eat Mail but their children are very intelligent and sharp in every word but they cannot afford to study if the authority will build many colleges school for review then every individual can help to the nation for growth. Hey to add a few more reasons how can a one forget about there are also some cons of free discipline the most prominent one is a lot of public will not take seriously for study to some extent the rule also have appointed some teachers in the institute the hey authority also have to pay more expensive it will definitely affect on a democracy in the economy All in all, I would like to say that teaching is more important to provide in every country this is definitely to help in the rise of the nation in the ultramodern epoch it is the point of debate on the ministry should pay free for inspection and manage it learning play a very important role in every individual. Hey this notion remains successful in keeping the majority in this favour the upcoming paragraph would cast shade on my argument related to very conception I totally wholehearted concur with the statement education is very important for everyone firstly, if the government will provide free education then anybody can get an education, in, addition the world search showed that which country has lack of source of discipline those countries recession is very down Secondly many people have not many money to eat Mail but their children are very intelligent and sharp in every word but they cannot afford to study if the authority will build many colleges school for class then every individual can help to the nation for success. Hey to add a few more reasons how can a one forget about there are also some cons of free improvement the most prominent one is a lot of public will not take seriously for study to some extent the state also have appointed some teachers in the institute the hey authority also have to pay more expensive it will definitely affect on a population in economy All in all, I would like to say that discipline is a more important to provide in every country this is definitely to help in the growth of the tribe
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culture then everyone can
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extent the
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more expensive it will
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affect
on a democracy in the economy

All in all, I would like to say that teaching is more
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to
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provide
in every
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country
this is
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to
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help
in the rise of the nation in the ultramodern epoch it is the point of debate on the ministry should
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pay
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free
for inspection and manage it learning play a
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very
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important
role in every
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individual
. Hey this notion remains successful in keeping the majority in this
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favour
the upcoming paragraph would cast shade on my argument related to
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very
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conception


I
totally
wholehearted concur with the statement
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education
is
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very
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important
for everyone
firstly
, if the
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government
will
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provide
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free
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education
then anybody can
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get
an
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education
, in, addition the world search
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showed
that which
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country
has lack of source of discipline those
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countries
recession is
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very
down
Secondly
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many
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people
have not
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many money
to eat Mail
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but
their children are
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very
intelligent and sharp in every word
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but
they cannot afford to
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study
if the
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authority
will build
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many
colleges school for
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class
then every
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individual
can
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help
to the nation for success.

Hey to
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add
a few more reasons how can a one forget about there are
also
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some
cons of
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free
improvement the most prominent one is
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a lot of
public will not take
seriously
for
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study
to
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some
extent the state
also
have appointed
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some
teachers in the institute the hey
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authority
also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pay
more expensive it will
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
definitely
Did you mean "effect"?
affect
on a population in economy

All in all, I would like to say that discipline is a more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
important
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
provide
in every
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
this is
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definitely
to
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help
in the growth of the tribe
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IELTS essay All education should be free to all people and pasid and maneged by the government

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
493 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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