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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. To what extent you agree

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The burning of fossil fuels produces a large amount of carbon emission in the atmosphere which pollutes our environment in a way that disrupts our ecosystem and threatens biodiversity. Global warming is another growing concern of elevated carbon footprints in the atmosphere which draws global attention to the dispute of whether cars running on fossil fuel consumption should be banned or not. In my opinion, it is not the question we should be asking. The right question is how quickly we can minimize carbon emission to protect this planet for our survival and replacing diesel cars with electric cars is the inevitable step we have to take. While the usage of diesel cars has benefited humans for decades, it is time that the government enforce strict regulations on the supply and usage of these cars. This will prompt the businesses to manufacture and invest in the clean energy alternatives. In addition, government can start by increasing taxes on the amount of carbon emitted per individual and money collected can contribute in the research of clean energy technology and manufacturing of electric cars. The more refined the technology of electric cars, the more it is convenient to produce in large batches with affordable expenses. Also, electric cars has to be cheap in order to encourage common people to buying more electric cars. It is only possible when businesses have sufficient resources to invest in research in order to produce clean technology that is cheaper and proficient. The government can help by subsidizing the enterprises and imposing a tax charge on amount of carbon emitted per person. However, banning diesel cars is merely a feeble try towards combating the total carbon emissions. We can not overlook the pollutants seeping in the environment from the manufacturing of construction material. Carbon emissions produced from steel manufacturing contributes massively in global warming. Moreover, single use plastics manufacturing and decomposition of paper and metal release harmful environmental pollutants that is causing animal species extinction and impeding human survival. therefore, diesel cars are not the sole reason of environmental ravages, we need to adopt methods individually to save our planet. To conclude, it is crucial to immediately restrict the number of fuel cars on roads and investors, businesses and the government should work collaboratively to make electric cars accessible. Nevertheless, there are other areas of carbon emissions that need to addressed as well.
The burning of fossil fuels produces a large amount of
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carbon
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emission
in the atmosphere which pollutes our environment in a way that disrupts our ecosystem and threatens biodiversity. Global warming is another growing concern of elevated
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
carbon
footprints in the atmosphere which draws global attention to the dispute of whether
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cars
running on fossil fuel consumption should
be banned
or not. In my opinion, it is not the question we should be asking. The right question is how
quickly
we can minimize
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carbon
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emission
to protect this planet for our survival and replacing
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diesel
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cars
with
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electric
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cars
is the inevitable step we
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have to
take.

While the usage of
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diesel
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cars
has benefited humans for decades, it is time that the
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government
enforce strict regulations on the supply and usage of these
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cars
. This will prompt the businesses to manufacture and invest in the clean energy alternatives.
In addition
,
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government
can
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start
by increasing taxes on the amount of
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carbon
emitted per individual and money collected can contribute in the research of clean energy technology and
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manufacturing
of
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electric
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cars
. The more refined the technology of
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electric
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cars
, the more it is convenient to produce in large batches with affordable expenses.
Also
,
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electric
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cars
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has to
be
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cheap
in order to encourage common
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people
to
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buying
more
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electric
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cars
. It is
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only
possible when businesses have sufficient resources to invest in research in order to produce clean technology
that is
cheaper and proficient. The
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government
can
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help
by subsidizing the enterprises and imposing a tax charge on amount of
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carbon
emitted per person.

However
, banning
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diesel
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cars
is
merely
a feeble try towards combating the total
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carbon
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emissions
. We can not overlook the pollutants seeping in the environment from the
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manufacturing
of construction material.
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Carbon
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emissions
produced from steel
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manufacturing
contributes
massively
in global warming.
Moreover
, single
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use
plastics
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manufacturing
and decomposition of paper and metal release harmful environmental pollutants
that is
causing animal species extinction and impeding human survival.
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therefore
,
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diesel
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cars
are not the sole reason of environmental ravages, we need to adopt methods
individually
to save our planet.

To conclude
, it is crucial to immediately restrict the number of fuel
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cars
on roads and investors, businesses and the
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government
should work
collaboratively
to
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make
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electric
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cars
accessible.
Nevertheless
, there are other areas of
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carbon
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emissions
that need to addressed
as well
.
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IELTS essay All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. To what extent you agree

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