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Air transport is increasingly used to export fruits and vegtables to countries . Some people say it is a good thing ,but other people oppose. Discuss both views and given your own opinion.

Air transport is increasingly used to export fruits and vegtables to countries. Some people say it is a good thing, but other people oppose. kxxEd
It is often argue that air transportation is progressively utizied to ship market gardens to nations. Few individuals tell it is a great needs, However other masses challenge. This essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, there are several merits to shift fruits and vegetables through air transport in all world. First, they should learn bussiness skills and develops of bonding in any countries.
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argue that air transportation is
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to ship market gardens to nations. Few individuals
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it is a great needs,
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other masses challenge. This essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in upcoming paragraphs.

To commence with, there are several merits to shift fruits and vegetables through air transport in all world.
First
, they should learn
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bussiness
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skills
and develops of bonding in any countries.
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IELTS essay Air transport is increasingly used to export fruits and vegtables to countries. Some people say it is a good thing, but other people oppose.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
73 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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