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Air traffic is lwading to more noise, pollution and airport construction. One reason for this is the growth of low- cost passenger flights, others to low cost holiday destinations. Some people say that the government should try to reduce air traffic by ta v.2

Air traffic is lwading to more noise, pollution and airport construction. One reason for this is the growth of low- cost passenger flights, others to low cost holiday destinations. Some people say that the government should try to reduce air traffic by ta v. 2
The emergence of cost-effective plane tickets and vacation packages had promted a sognificant rise on the air transport industry. Consequentle, additional airport facilities were built which resulted to further noise, pollution and air traffic. These drawbacks have encouraged to push for additional tax to the industry, which I am strongly opposed to. In the first place, flight taxes are already very expensive. I do not think airports will be amenable to increase it more because of the fear of losing revenues. If this proposition will be implemented, people will surely search for other means of transport that better suit their budget. I, for one have purchased discounted plane tickets but the astronomical tax more than made up for the lessened price. Furthermore, if commuters turn to different modes of travelling like trains and cars, pollution, noise and traffic will still remain as issues, only this timr if would be on land rather than on air. The frequency of flights may lessen but as a result, the number of land and sea vehicles will also increase eventually reaching the same amount of pollution caused by aviation. Therefore, it is impractical to increase the burden among passengers by adding to the already heavy taxes. This is not only because it poses a risk for decline in profitd but it also offers a little solution to pollution and it even compromises the safety and convenience of travellers.
The emergence of cost-effective
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plane
tickets and vacation packages had
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promted
a
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sognificant
rise on the air transport industry.
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Consequentle
, additional airport facilities
were built
which resulted to
further
noise,
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pollution
and air traffic. These drawbacks have encouraged to push for additional
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tax
to the industry, which I am
strongly
opposed to.

In the
first
place, flight
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taxes
are already
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very
expensive. I do not
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think
airports will be amenable to increase it more
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because
of the fear of losing revenues. If this proposition will
be implemented
,
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people
will
surely
search for other means of transport that better suit their budget. I, for one have
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purchased
discounted
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plane
tickets
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but
the astronomical
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tax
more than made up for the lessened price.

Furthermore
, if commuters turn to
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different
modes of travelling like trains and cars,
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pollution
, noise and traffic will
still
remain as issues,
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only
this
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timr
if would be on land
rather
than on air. The frequency of flights may lessen
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but
as a result
, the number of land and sea vehicles will
also
increase
eventually
reaching the same amount of
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pollution
caused by aviation.

Therefore
, it is impractical to increase the burden among passengers by adding to the already heavy
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taxes
. This is not
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only
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because
it poses a
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risk
for decline in
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profitd
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but
it
also
offers a
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little
solution to
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pollution
and it even compromises the safety and convenience of
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travellers
.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Air traffic is lwading to more noise, pollution and airport construction. One reason for this is the growth of low- cost passenger flights, others to low cost holiday destinations. Some people say that the government should try to reduce air traffic by ta v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
234 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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