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Agree or disagree with given statements

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Ever since colleges and universities have been established, they operated in a transparent notion: the honor is for the wildest academic performer. I highly agree with such statement for several reasons. First, if it were easy everyone would have done it. In order to improve the world we need hard workers that appreciate every chance given to them. High academic performers will never hesitate to put any effort if the world needed them because it is their goal from the begging to enhance their community. Second, if colleges and universities admitted everyone, no one will thrive to increase their academic abilities because their position is guaranteed. This would result in crucial crisis, starting from economic breakdown and ending up from the zero point; as if the world never prospered! Third and last, people who do not crave academic growth are not alive; they are just prayed years later. Life without the purpose of increasing knowledge is meaningless because it causes more harm than benefit. At the end, nothing is perfect: even college admission process. I believe colleges and universities selection process is not in the best shape that it should be in, in order to grant a productive community. It needs some adjustments but regardless of that it should stay revolving around the same concept; academic performance.

Ever since colleges and universities have been established
, they operated in a transparent notion: the honor is for the wildest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withintellectualscholarlyscholasticcollegiate
academic
 performer. I highly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with such statement for several reasons.

First
, if it were easy everyone would have done it. In order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 the world we need This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 workers that appreciate every chance This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 to them. High You use this word too often, consider replacing it withintellectualscholarlyscholasticcollegiate
academic
 performers will never hesitate to put any effort if the world needed them This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it is their goal from the begging to enhance their community.

Second, if colleges and universities admitted everyone, no one will thrive to increase their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withintellectualscholarlyscholasticcollegiate
academic
 abilities This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 their position is guaranteed
. This would result in crucial crisis, starting from economic breakdown and ending up from the zero point; as if the world never prospered!

Third and last, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who do not crave You use this word too often, consider replacing it withintellectualscholarlyscholasticcollegiate
academic
 growth are not alive; they are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 prayed years later. Life without the purpose of increasing knowledge is meaningless This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it causes more harm than benefit.

At the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
, nothing is perfect: even college admission process. I believe colleges and universities selection process is not in the best shape that it should be in, in order to grant a productive community. It needs This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 adjustments This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 regardless of that it should stay revolving around the same concept; You use this word too often, consider replacing it withintellectualscholarlyscholasticcollegiate
academic
 performance. 