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After reading the paragraph about the life of the three National Geographic Explorers, I feel that they are indeed hard working people

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After reading the paragraph about the life of the three National Geographic Explorers, I feel that they are indeed hard working people. Besides that, their jobs are actually interesting. Unlike the others, these people are explorers, they often discover new things about the world to enhance their knowledge. Moreover, each three of them have their own expectation of how to explore the world in various ways. In general, I think people like them deserve a great spot in society.
After reading the paragraph about the life of the three National Geographic Explorers, I feel that they are
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hard working
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that, their jobs are actually interesting. Unlike the others, these
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people
are explorers, they
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often
discover new things about the world to enhance their knowledge.
Moreover
, each three of them have their
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expectation of how to explore the world in various ways.
In general
, I
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think
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like them deserve a great spot in society.
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IELTS essay After reading the paragraph about the life of the three National Geographic Explorers, I feel that they are indeed hard working people

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