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Advertising has become part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising has a positive impact on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Advertising has become part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising has a positive impact on our lives. 20D6
Nowadays, advertising plays a huge role in our everyday life helping people making choice when they buy goods and because of that, some say that has a positive impact in our lives. This essay will explain my view about advertising as well as discuss both positive and negative sides of advertisings. On the one hand, there are some types of advertisings on a local or national level and without a doubt they crucial role in people’s lives, especially for people who just started their own business. Some small companies have no chance to survive without making advertisings about themselves. They usually do local advertisings to interest people with their products. In my home town, for example, thanks to advertising a huge number of cafes and bars become popular as well as some clothing stores. In addition to that, national-level advertising, help some companies become more famous not just inside country but also abroad so as a result, it will be great for company as well as for the country. On the other hand, advertising is not always used for good purposes, and a lot of popular companies which produce noxious products, use advertising more and more trying to push people to buy those kinds of products. As a result, people buy goods that they do not really need to spend their last money on. Companies such as Coca-Cola or Pepsi could be a great example of bad use of advertisings when only advertisement budget in those companies around one billion dollars. A lot of people are suffering from many kinds of diseases after consuming their products. To conclude, I agree that advertisement has a positive impact on our lives, sometimes helping us make a better choice when we want to buy some goods. However, I think the government should control the advertisement market.
Nowadays, advertising plays a huge role in our everyday life helping
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people
making choice when they
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buy
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goods
and
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because
of that,
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some
say that has a
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positive
impact in our
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lives
. This essay will
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explain
my view about advertising
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as discuss both
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positive
and
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negative
sides of
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advertisings
.

On the one hand, there are
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some
types of
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advertisings on
a local or national level and without a doubt they crucial role in
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people’s
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lives
,
especially
for
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people
who
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just
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started
their
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own
business.
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Some
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small
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companies
have no chance to survive without making
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advertisings
about themselves. They
usually
do local
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advertisings
to interest
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people
with their products. In my home town,
for example
, thanks to advertising a huge number of
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cafes
and bars become popular
as well
as
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some
clothing stores.
In addition
to that, national-level advertising,
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help
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some
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companies
become more
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famous
not
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just
inside country
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but
also
abroad
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so
as a result
, it will be great for
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company
as well
as for the country.

On the other hand
, advertising is not always
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used
for
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good
purposes, and
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a lot of
popular
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companies
which produce noxious products,
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use
advertising more and more trying to push
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people
to
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buy
those kinds of products.
As a result
,
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people
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buy
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goods
that they do not
really
need to spend their last money on.
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Companies
such as Coca-Cola or Pepsi could be a great example of
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bad
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use
of
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advertisings
when
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only
advertisement budget in those
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companies
around one billion dollars.
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A lot of
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people
are suffering from
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many
kinds of diseases after consuming their products.

To conclude
, I
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agree
that advertisement has a
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positive
impact on our
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lives
,
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sometimes
helping us
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make
a better choice when we want to
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buy
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some
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goods
.
However
, I
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think
the
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government
should control the advertisement market.
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IELTS essay Advertising has become part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising has a positive impact on our lives.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
303 words
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