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Advertising discourages us from being different and individuals eventually look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Advertising discourages us from being different and individuals eventually look the same. 2kBb

I will be over the moon being a small part of the organization which makes a difference and changes our world for the better. The UN Women is an extremely important part of the UN especially in Kazakhstan where female are faced with discrimination, underappritiation and violence. Moreover, my motivation is to help people and to understand how SDG could be achieved and what should have done for it. Furthermore, since I was a child I dreamed about work in the UN and now I am planning to get my master degree in sustainable development. I hope that my experience in organizing online events which I gained during my internship in AIFC Event and property division will be useful.

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 my master degree in sustainable development.

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