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In the future,it seems more difficult to live on earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live, such as mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the future, it seems more difficult to live on earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live, such as mars. k18e
Due to the advancement in science and technology, it look quite difficult to live in earth because of some consequences like pollution, global warming and many more. Some claim that we should spend more money to make life on other planets for living the future life, while others oppose it. I totally disagree and provide relevant points before framing the conclusion. Categorically speaking, the predominant fact behind this notion is that the availability of resources. There are several facilities available on earth and also gives us countless benefits as compare to Mars. If we think that in future, the level of water would increase on earth that will make life complicated. For instance, in a recent survey conducted by researchers said that with the majority of people's efforts, life will become more easier and we can enjoy better lifestyle. In addition to this, when compared with other facts that everyone should take as responsibility to clean the environment so that living beings can long life and also enjoy the beauty of the world. To examplify this situation, nowadays humans cutting more and more trees to fulfill their needs so authorities should be spent money on planting trees and also make strict code of conduct against those people rather than wasting money on researching other planets. Thus, earth gives freedom to live freely. To wind up, I totally disagree with this statement, although some people might think that spending money on other planets will very important for our life, to the individuals and to the nation as a whole. To look into other things, government should invest equally into all.
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consequences like
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claim that we should spend more
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money
to
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life
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life
, while others oppose it. I
totally
disagree and provide relevant points
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before
framing the conclusion.
Categorically
speaking, the predominant fact behind this notion is that the availability of resources. There are several facilities available on
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earth
and
also
gives us countless benefits as compare to Mars. If we
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think
that
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in future
, the level of water would increase on
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earth
that will
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make
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life
complicated.
For instance
, in a recent survey conducted by researchers said that with the majority of
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people
's efforts,
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life
will become
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more easier
and we can enjoy better lifestyle.
In addition
to this, when compared with
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other
facts that everyone should take as responsibility to clean the environment
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so
that living beings can long
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life
and
also
enjoy the beauty of the world. To
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examplify
this situation, nowadays humans cutting more and more trees to fulfill their needs
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so
authorities should
be spent
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money
on planting trees and
also
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make
strict code of conduct against those
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people
rather
than wasting
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money
on researching
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other
planets.
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,
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earth
gives freedom to
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live
freely
. To wind up, I
totally
disagree with this statement, although
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some
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people
might
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think
that spending
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money
on
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other
planets will
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very
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important
for our
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life
, to the individuals and to the nation as a whole. To look into
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other
things,
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government
should invest
equally
into all.
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IELTS essay In the future, it seems more difficult to live on earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live, such as mars.

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