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Many argue that advertising is very successful at convincing us to purchase products, while others say that advertisement is rather common and therefore less attention is spent on it. While some commercials can influence people’s choice of products, I believe that the high frequency and through some changes in their design as well as their appearance they are more often than not ignored. On the one hand, there are many cases where consumers are influenced by an advertisement. This can lead them to purchasing a product that they originally did not intend to buy. For example, there are often promotions that incentivise buying one more product to receive a third one for free. The consumer often falls prey to this offer since he doesn't want to forfeit a free product but as a result inadvertently spends more money than this individual intended to do. On the other hand, in recent years the frequency of advertisements has dramatically increased, especially in the mobile web, whereas it has decreased in the everyday life. A major reason for this is that more companies follow a “mobile-first” company strategy. For instance, a good example are the advertisements spaces from Google which appear on various website and have a standardised design. As a result, consumers pay less attention to these advertisements since they are always very similar in design and less intruding. In conclusion, although the frequency of advertisements has increased, many people pay less attention to them since they are very often overlooked due to their design. Therefore, I agree that they are rather easily ignored.
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argue that advertising is
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very
successful at convincing us to
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purchase
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products
, while others say that
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advertisement
is
rather
common and
therefore
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less
attention
is spent
on it. While
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some
commercials can influence
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people
’s choice of
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products
, I believe that the high frequency and through
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some
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changes
in their
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design
as well
as their appearance they are more
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often
than not
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ignored
.

On the one hand, there are
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many
cases where consumers
are influenced
by an
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advertisement
. This can lead them to purchasing a
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product
that they
originally
did not intend to
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buy
.
For example
, there are
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often
promotions that
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incentivise
buying one more
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product
to receive a third one for free. The consumer
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often
falls prey to this offer since he doesn't want to forfeit a free
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product
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but
as a result
inadvertently
spends more money than this individual intended to do.

On the other hand
, in recent years the frequency of
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advertisements
has
dramatically
increased,
especially
in the mobile web, whereas it has decreased in the everyday life. A major reason for this is that more
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companies
follow a “mobile-
first
”
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company
strategy.
For instance
, a
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good
example are the
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advertisements
spaces from Google which appear on various website and have a
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standardised
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design
.
As a result
, consumers pay
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less
attention to these
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advertisements
since they are always
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very
similar in
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design
and
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less
intruding.

In conclusion
, although the frequency of
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advertisements
has increased,
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many
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people
pay
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less
attention to them since they are
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very
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often
overlooked due to their
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design
.
Therefore
, I
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agree
that they are
rather
easily
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ignored
.
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IELTS essay advertisement successfully convince

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
262 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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