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Advantages of working in the group

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There are some advantages of working in the groups. An important benefit is that everyone learns through team collaboration. For example, members get useful information from each other to expand their knowledge and abilities. Not only that, this method can help by making their knowledge their own. Another positive aspect is that group work can enhance the affection between students and develop their own communication skills. Because of the process of exchanging information and knowledge, refers to the orientation process. emotions and senses by communicating and helping others. As a result, students succeed in learning, communication skills, and interpersonal relationships. In coclution, teamwork is very beneficial.
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advantages of working in the groups. An
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benefit is that everyone learns through team collaboration.
For example
, members
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get
useful information from each other to expand their knowledge and abilities. Not
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that, this method can
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help
by making their knowledge their
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own
. Another
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positive
aspect is that group work can enhance the affection between students and develop their
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own
communication
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skills
.
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Because
of the process of exchanging information and knowledge, refers to the orientation process.
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emotions
and senses by communicating and helping others.
As a result
, students succeed in learning, communication
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skills
, and interpersonal relationships. In
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coclution
, teamwork is
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very
beneficial.

IELTS essay Advantages of working in the group

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