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advantage and disadvantage of growth amount of young adults in society

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Nowadays. In some nations, the population of older people is decreasing meanwhile increasing in adults population. This essay will describe both the positive and negative aspects of this situation. The advantage of increasing adult population are numerous because new generation bring new technology, thinking, new aspect to society. at the present time while people around the world can connect and access to new knowledge. These new adults can use their power to achieve more. for example. In contrast, older generation also full of knowledge and experiences. They know a lot about the past. The most significant knowledge is history and also culture as well. If these generation are decreasing that mean we loss our history. In conclusion, there are both pro and con of these population situation. The best way is to learn as much as we can from the older one.

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 culture as well
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 our history.

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