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Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better lime to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better lime to be alive than now. with this opinion? bq5Q
Modern technology has been developing at a great pace and with the advent of the latest equipment and procedures in various fields in the last century, the life expectancy of human has increased and helped to live in a better era I believe that advancements in technology have brought humankind to a better world by rescuing in many critical situations. Advanced Machinery and robotics have provided immense development in the medical field. Nowadays, many emergency operations and treatment procedures are well received and diagnosed by these robotic procedures. Moreover, attending such critical situations in the absence of the doctor brings a great scope of survival. For example, a well designed first aid robot in an ambulance has created another milestone in the medical field figuring out the injury quickly by scanning the whole body of the victim at once and giving appropriate treatment. Secondly, Technology has always been developing to make human life easier and risk-free. One such field where human is replaced by technology is Space research. All the trails to verify the conditions and various parameters outside the earth are designed to be performed by robots. However, there might be some issues where technology has created some negative impacts on human nature, they can be considered and altered to make better use of technology for our livelihood. On the other hand, Apart from all the great support we get from advanced technology, there are few fields that have been using technology to make human health weaker and polluted. One such field is artificial manufacturing and adulteration of various food products. Usage of modern science to harm mankind need to be severely eradicated. To conclude, I completely agree that present-day modern technology has provided us with many benefits and making our lives better and helping people to live longer and healthy.
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technology
has been developing at a great pace and with the advent of the latest equipment and procedures in various
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fields
in the last century, the life expectancy of
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human
has increased and
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helped
to
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live
in a
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better
era I believe that advancements in
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technology
have brought humankind to a
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better
world by rescuing in
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many
critical situations.

Advanced Machinery and robotics have provided immense development in the medical
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field
. Nowadays,
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many
emergency operations and treatment procedures are
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well received
and diagnosed by these robotic procedures.
Moreover
, attending such critical situations in the absence of the doctor brings a great scope of survival.
For example
, a
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well designed
first
aid robot in an ambulance has created another milestone in the medical
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field
figuring out the injury
quickly
by scanning the whole body of the victim at once and giving appropriate treatment.

Secondly
,
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Technology
has always been developing to
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make
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human
life easier and
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risk
-free. One such
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field
where
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human
is replaced
by
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technology
is Space research. All the trails to verify the conditions and various parameters outside the earth
are designed
to
be performed
by robots.
However
, there might be
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some
issues where
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technology
has created
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some
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negative
impacts on
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human
nature, they can
be considered
and altered to
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make
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better
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use
of
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technology
for our livelihood.

On the other hand
, Apart from all the great support we
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from advanced
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technology
, there are few
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fields
that have been using
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technology
to
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make
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human
health weaker and polluted. One such
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field
is artificial manufacturing and adulteration of various food products. Usage of modern science to harm mankind need to be
severely
eradicated.

To conclude
, I completely
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agree
that present-day modern
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technology
has provided us with
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many
benefits and making our
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lives
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better
and helping
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people
to
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live
longer and healthy.
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IELTS essay Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better lime to be alive than now. with this opinion?

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