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Advance in technology and automation have reduce the need for manual labour there for

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Over the past decade most of the companies fully digitalis and already interned in modern technology ara. And day by day increased unemployment in globally as well as reducing working hours because manually labour lass requirement. i will discuss in the essay my point of view with numerous reasons. First of all, automation is taking over the world very quickly implementation in advance technology and using techniques so in modernization ara need qualified labour and employees that work quickly and with in few hours due to company pay lass wages to labour. Furthermore, gradually reduce enabling staff. For example college
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as reducing working hours
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because
manually
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First of all
, automation is taking over the world
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very
quickly
implementation in advance technology and using techniques
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in modernization
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need qualified
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labour
and employees that work
quickly
and with in few hours due to
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company
pay lass wages to
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.
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gradually
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reduce
enabling staff.
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IELTS essay Advance in technology and automation have reduce the need for manual labour there for

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  American English
1 paragraphs
99 words
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