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Actually I a student from Bangladesh and I am preparing myself for conducting Ielts exam. I havent got admitted anywhere due to some financial issue so that I always try to follow Ross IELTS Academy and Mr. samson is my most favorite teacher. I can see That they are taking online mock test and the price is too high that i cant afford . In this case how should be the next step for a student from ppor country like me ?

Actually I a student from Bangladesh and I am preparing myself for conducting Ielts exam. I havent got admitted anywhere due to some financial issue so that I always try to follow Ross IELTS Academy and Mr. samson is my most favorite teacher. I can see That they are taking online mock test and the price is too high that i cant afford. In this case how should be the next step for a student from ppor country like me? Bgq3p
Actually I a student from Bangladesh and I am preparing myself for conducting Ielts exam. I havent got admitted anywhere due to some financial issue so that I always try to follow Ross IELTS Academy and Mr. samson is my most favorite teacher. I can see That they are taking online mock test and the price is too high that i cant afford. In this case how should be the next step for a student from ppor country like me?
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IELTS essay Actually I a student from Bangladesh and I am preparing myself for conducting Ielts exam. I havent got admitted anywhere due to some financial issue so that I always try to follow Ross IELTS Academy and Mr. samson is my most favorite teacher. I can see That they are taking online mock test and the price is too high that i cant afford. In this case how should be the next step for a student from ppor country like me?

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