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According to William Saroyan's saying, he indicates that wisdom cannot be achieved without failing in our lives yet not everyone acquires the wisdom after their failure.

According to William Saroyan's saying, he indicates that wisdom cannot be achieved without failing in our lives yet not everyone acquires the wisdom after their failure. I do believe in the fact that the greatest lessons we acquire from our life is not from the schools we attend but from the mistakes we make, which i call it the best teacher that makes a change in our lives. The more mistakes we make the more experience we gain, It is so important to live our lives fully as human beings by this i mean experiencing every aspect of life. This summer i read a book called Think And Grow Rich by Napoleon Hill, which was one of life changing experience for me, as i was going through pages i noticed that the greatest inventors, entrepreneurs, scientists never achieved their goals without failing thousand times. For sure what leads us to success after failure is our wisdom and our belief in ourselves. Nobody's life is perfect and we are all fallible, but we as human beings, we do have the ability to change our circumstances by using our mind power. As a twenty one year old guy, i have made a mistake which completely opened my eyes to see the right and the best thing for me. Since when i started knowing myself i have always dreamed of serving people and for that reason there was two fields of study in my mind to pursue at a university in the future, one was Politics and the other one was Medicine but as years passed i kept listening to others instead of following my heart's voice. After graduating from high school my parents advised me to study Medicine because they believed that it was the optimum choice for me and also it was lucrative job. without hesitation i agreed to their request since i was their only child so that played crucial role to obey to them and applied to a university which was completely different and bizarre to my goals and dreams. From the moment i started reading medical books i knew i wasn't accomplishing anything because i was never going to be creative in that field by that i was not going to be able to touch people's life the way i wanted. It took me two years to confess to my parents that it was not my real passion, so i wanted to leave the university before being too late. Yes, i failed at completing medicine but it made me realize that what i really wanted was studying politics, the only way to serve people and touch their hearts without using my hands by my good work and kindness. Failure is a blessing in disguise, which i agree to, because it showed me my real desire. In conclusion my failing experience taught me that the greatest mistake we do when we listen to others while we have ourselves to draw our own path in our lives that lead us to success.
According to William Saroyan's saying, he indicates that wisdom cannot
be achieved
without failing in our
lives
yet
not everyone acquires the wisdom after their failure.

I do believe in the fact that the greatest lessons we acquire from our
life
is not from the schools we attend
but
from the
mistakes
we
make
, which i call it the best teacher that
makes
a
change
in our
lives
.

The more
mistakes
we
make
the more experience we gain, It is
so
important
to
live
our
lives
fully
as human beings by this i mean experiencing every aspect of life.

This summer i read a book called
Think
And Grow Rich by Napoleon Hill, which was one of
life
changing experience for me, as i was going through pages i noticed that the greatest inventors, entrepreneurs, scientists never achieved their goals without failing thousand times. For sure what leads us to success after failure is our wisdom and our belief in ourselves.

Nobody's
life
is perfect and we are all fallible,
but
we as human beings, we do have the ability to
change
our circumstances by using our mind power.

As a twenty one year
old
guy, i have made a
mistake
which completely opened my eyes to
see
the right and the best thing for me.

Since when i
started
knowing myself i have always dreamed of serving
people
and for that reason there was two fields of study in my mind to pursue at a university in the future, one was Politics and the other one was Medicine
but
as years passed i
kept
listening to others
instead
of following my heart's voice.

After graduating from high school my parents advised me to study Medicine
because
they believed that it was the optimum choice for me and
also
it was lucrative job. without hesitation i
agreed
to their request since i was their
only
child
so
that played crucial role to obey to them and applied to a university which was completely
different
and bizarre to my goals and dreams.

From the moment i
started
reading medical books i knew i wasn't accomplishing anything
because
i was never going to be creative in that field by that i was not going to be able to touch
people
's
life
the way i wanted.

It took me two years to confess to my parents that it was not my real passion,
so
i wanted to
leave
the university
before
being too late. Yes, i failed at completing medicine
but
it made me realize that what i
really
wanted was studying politics, the
only
way to serve
people
and touch their hearts without using my hands by my
good
work and kindness.

Failure is a blessing in disguise, which i
agree
to,
because
it
showed
me my real desire.

In conclusion
my failing experience taught me that the greatest
mistake
we do when we listen to others while we have ourselves to draw our
own
path in our
lives
that lead us to success.
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IELTS essay According to William Saroyan's saying, he indicates that wisdom cannot be achieved without failing in our lives yet not everyone acquires the wisdom after their failure.

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502 words
6.0
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